Title: A Failure of the Heart
| 03 Mar 2010 9:54 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the discussions about parents! Perhaps it will make people think about their parents! I love the picture of Severus worrying over Harry at a game thank you for updating
Wanted to read the entire story before I reviewed. I so like this. You pretty well kept Sev in character, snarky and all. The only OCC moment I see is this last chapter, but it's within limits. I so love how this relationship is growing. I'm curious about Draco and Ron, maybe a friendship there because of their concern for Harry. If Sev takes Quidditch away from Harry there will be a MAJOR problem. Thank you for the great story.
This is a great story! I do hope that Harry will be okay and without serious complications. I can't imagine how horrible this must be for Severus to see Harry in such a state. They have just found each other and become a family. I would hate it if Harry lost his memory or worse.
Great chapter!
Title: A Failure of the Heart
| 03 Mar 2010 1:30 am
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Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I'm just loving this story. You really get to the heart of the matter, and dig down deep, and you write Severus' and Harry's emotions. Well done.
I really have to go back and review the Christmas chapter, which somehow I missed, and I absolutely loved it! :)
Yay to updates! and this time I have remembered to actually track this! lol me and my brain urgh hehe cant wait for more :)
Oh, man!!! This is soooooooooooo good! I really, really love this story! And this chapter! Maybe Ron will calm down now. Can not wait for the next update!
Oh cool! im sure this was marked complete when I read it before so I didnt bother tracking the story lol, I just got to read a few chapters in a row which is cool, im glad that you decided to carry on with the story, its a good idea and well written :)
HO MY GOD! THIS STORY IS SPLENDID ...I CRYED WHILE I WAS READING THIS CAPTER WHEN HARRY LET SNAPE INTO HIS MIND.... IT'S SAD THAT HARRY HAS GONE THROUGH THIS BUT IT'S AWFULLY BEAUTIFUL HOW SNAPE CHANGED AFTER THE REVELATION!
Aw, this is a wonderful story. You should enter this in the Christmas fic contest.
And I'm dying for an update !! Oh, and a sequel when you're finished, if I'm not being too greedy!
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