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Reviews For Menagerie
I love it! And... not so terribly AU. It feels canon, even though it isn't. I love your toddler Potter. And Snape's point of view is marvellous. Thank you. You are definitely on my top 3 for the votes!
“Phoenix, brat. Phoe-nix.” “Now that you mention it,” Severus said dryly, “the Headmaster does indeed bear a certain resemblance to a duck.” Severus tried to pull his thumb free with limited success and sighed again. “Fine, keep it. I wasn’t using it anyway.” and my ULTIMATE favourite: “As if we didn’t have enough birds in the conversation,” Severus complained, “you choose to teach him to sound like a penguin.” Oh and this one; “Duck,” he assured Severus. “If you even think of presenting me with such a nickname, Potter, you will be in detention until you pass your NEWTs.” The boy smiled. “Ssssnake.” “Better,” he acknowledged. “That will get you detention only until your OWLs.” I also loved how Harry said "good duck" and "bad duck" whenever someone did something he liked/disliked.That was just adorable! It was ALL adorable though! This is now one of my all-time favourite stories, thanks so much for writing it! I still can't believe that you turned my prompt into something so fabulous!
I didn't know what to expect at first. I thought it would be something bizarre like people turning into animals. But this was just charming. Well done! |
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