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Reviews For Menagerie
Title: Menagerie 15 Dec 2009 9:11 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this story and appreciate that it was intended as a one-shot, but how I'd LOVE to see more of this Severus with a sense of humor.
Title: Menagerie 11 Dec 2009 2:17 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahaha! 'Good snake'! Love it!
Title: Menagerie 09 Dec 2009 9:08 pm
Reviewer: rippersgirl06 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hilarious! You had me giggling like crazy. I think my favorite part was when Harry called Dumbledore a "bad duck". *giggles some more*
Title: Menagerie 09 Dec 2009 1:42 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, this was so cute! I loved it.
Title: Menagerie 06 Dec 2009 1:24 am
Reviewer: missyanne (Signed) [Report This]
    Very, Very nice story. It was hard to stop laughing.
Title: Menagerie 05 Dec 2009 8:59 am
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    DUCK!

    I love it! And... not so terribly AU. It feels canon, even though it isn't.

    I love your toddler Potter. And Snape's point of view is marvellous.

    Thank you. You are definitely on my top 3 for the votes!
Title: Menagerie 30 Nov 2009 6:31 am
Reviewer: L. R. Odell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I enjoyed every minute of this! Thank you!^^
Title: Menagerie 28 Nov 2009 1:43 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was absolutely AMAZING! I absolutely never even dreamt of a scenario like this when I suggested "Duck!" and you've created something genius with it! It's original to the extreme, it's HILARIOUS and it's so darn cute! I loved it so much! You have some really witty lines in there, and Harry is just adorable! It was really hard to pick out my favourite lines but in the end I narrowed it down to:

    “Phoenix, brat. Phoe-nix.”

    “Now that you mention it,” Severus said dryly, “the Headmaster does indeed bear a certain resemblance to a duck.”

    Severus tried to pull his thumb free with limited success and sighed again. “Fine, keep it. I wasn’t using it anyway.”

    and my ULTIMATE favourite: “As if we didn’t have enough birds in the conversation,” Severus complained, “you choose to teach him to sound like a penguin.”

    Oh and this one; “Duck,” he assured Severus.

    “If you even think of presenting me with such a nickname, Potter, you will be in detention until you pass your NEWTs.”

    The boy smiled. “Ssssnake.”

    “Better,” he acknowledged. “That will get you detention only until your OWLs.”

    I also loved how Harry said "good duck" and "bad duck" whenever someone did something he liked/disliked.That was just adorable! It was ALL adorable though!

    This is now one of my all-time favourite stories, thanks so much for writing it! I still can't believe that you turned my prompt into something so fabulous!
Title: Menagerie 28 Nov 2009 3:20 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved it! Good snake indeed!
Title: Menagerie 24 Nov 2009 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Librasmile (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay THAT was cute!

    I didn't know what to expect at first. I thought it would be something bizarre like people turning into animals. But this was just charming. Well done!

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