| Title: Menagerie
| 22 Nov 2009 6:39 pm
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| Reviewer: severitusfan4ever (Anonymous)
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Oooo I love it! I'd love to see a prequel with the trip to the lake :)
Excellent! Humorous, but sweet! Severus was a goner long before he ever set foot in Dumbledore's office and we all know it!
Great story!
Absolutely not what I expected given either the prompt or the summary! That was hilarious and brilliant! I wish there was more, though I guess that was a good place to end it. :-)
Awww!! WAY cute! That was simply adorable and I loved every minute of it! Fantastic. It was just too cute. I loved that Harry called Severus a "good snake" and in the end so did Albus. *snickers* And poor Snape has to deal with two babies. *laughs insanely* Very good! Loved it Bil!
Oh my God!!! I love it.
You should consider writing a sequel to this, showing Harry growing up with Snape.
Oh, I really loved the ending. Harry snuggling up to a grumpy Snape. Too too cute.
| Title: Menagerie
| 21 Nov 2009 6:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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I think I've just melted into a puddle--I cannot believe how much cuteness you've packed into this little fic! I love several of Severus' quotes, including, "He'd love anyone who showed him a duck!" Lol! At first I thought it would be all laughs, but I love how you snuck the seriousness of the situation into the middle also. It's like you connected me with Harry and then you dropped the bomb and I was very upset to hear that he was being abused.
Let's hope his Snake will take good care of him (and you and I both know he will). What a great read--thanks for sharing!
-P.G.
OMG I laughed so hard reading this. I would pick a best line but there were so many. Very, very funny.
That was wonderful! I laughed so hard all the way through I thought Harry would be calling me a Bad something or other! Are you dead set on ending it here? I would love to see a series of one shots of milestones in their lives. Great story!
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