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Reviews For Blood Magic
Title: Carelessness 09 Jan 2010 1:13 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm...interesting! Ron is having premonitions while dreaming? I'm curious as to what this is going to mean in the future.

    I'm kinda proud of Harry for not 'following the crowd' and deciding to pass on drinking the firewhiskey. I do wish though that he hadn't bought it for Ron either. They both deserved the punishment they received.

    Harry needs to more careful in how he treats Hermione; his treatment of her in Hogsmead was rude, improper, and offensive. I know that Harry felt he was only teasing, but Ron was right to call him out on it. Hopefully, he will consider Hermione's feelings before engaging in that kind of behavior in the future.
Title: Carelessness 08 Jan 2010 10:37 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!! How embarrassing. Hey, it would be really cool, if you put on some more chappies again soon? I'm all caught up now, and I at this chapter, and there aren't any more to read, and I find it easier to read the story here at P & S, than at some of the others. The print is bigger, and clearer.

    Can't wait for the next chappie.

    Author's Response:

    But I posted two today!

    I probably won't post more tonight, but I'll do another two tomorrow morning.  We're getting close to the end....

Title: Gifts and Fears 08 Jan 2010 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh! At least Harry didn't have Firewhiskey, but his father is still not going to be pleased with him.

    Harry is such a flirt and such a bad boy. I love it!! :)

    I love your version of Harry. I hate a goody-goody Harry.

    Author's Response: ;-)
Title: New Alliances 08 Jan 2010 7:54 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that the misunderstandings were at least in part cleared up.

    I do wish that Severus had allowed Harry to explain what happened before losing his temper. It's not Harry's fault that Hermione misunderstood what he was trying to say, which is basically that he is confused by all the conflicting expectations that are being sent his way. He needed someone to listen to him and help him to understand and cope; unfortunately, she took it as a personal insult instead.

    Whether Hermione wants to admit it or not, she too has certain prejudices against the 'pure bloods' and her expectations of Harry were rather unfair. He is playing a balancing act right now and isn't quite certain where he stands or belongs. He doesn't feel that he truly belongs in either world. It's probably best that they have decided to see other people for now, because neither of them is ready for the kind of relationship they were beginning to fall into.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, that's exactly what Harry needs. And Severus feels so guilty that he's making things worse, just as Hermione made things worse because she was afraid. 

    I hope you're enjoying it! 

Title: New Alliances 08 Jan 2010 6:43 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that conversation with Olivia was funny, and cute. I'm getting excited for the ball. One of the best moments in this story.

    I'm glad that things seemed to be smoothed over with Snape, and him taking Harry gently by the shoulders, while he was yawning and sleepy, was just too cute.
Title: Consequences 08 Jan 2010 4:10 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awwww.... I'm so mad at Snape right now, but then I suppose that's only reasonable right? I was annoyed at Harry, but really he didn't meant to be git to Hermione. I am an tenterhooks now so must go read the next chapter!!

    Author's Response:

    Snape is definitely not handling this well. He knows it though.

    Glad you're enjoying it! 

Title: Consequences 08 Jan 2010 8:10 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm so glad that they've made up. Now he has to do it with Severus, Remus and olin.

    ooh, I can't wait to see Snape's reaction to the pants.
Title: The Dangers of Trust 08 Jan 2010 7:57 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!! Harry's world is crumbling upon him!

    I hope that everything works out with Remus and Hermione.

    Severus has to be careful what he says from now on, he's influencing Harry.
Title: Layers 08 Jan 2010 7:47 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Snape hides his worry over Harry by being gruff.

    I sense that Harry is trying to do what he perceives as pleasing Severus, and it's not necessarily how Snape perceives it anymore.

    Author's Response: Yes, they've definitely disconnected on that, by now, and in multiple ways.
Title: Contracts 08 Jan 2010 7:33 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Harry, what DID you do now?

    I'm glad that everyone got to see the Hereim ritual though, and how much James still loved him, and how much Severus wanted this.

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