| Title: Mapping Enemy Territory
| 19 Aug 2014 11:13 am
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| Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous)
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Ha! Now, this time, using his charm and avoiding his friends' interrogation, he really seemed to live up to James' reputation!
I loved it! You have a well told story here with excellent characterization and a good plot. I liked Severus' and Harry's relationship growth. It started off rocky but it was allowed to blossom over time.
I read a lot of different HP fics and I really appreciated the Harmony aspect to this fic as well as the Drarry (Harry & Draco friendship). Those relationship connections made this fic all the more enjoyable. Thanks for writing.
| Title: The Wrong Answer
| 18 Aug 2014 12:48 pm
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| Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous)
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Mmmm-Hmm. OK, I guess that just convinced Ron as well. (giggles at the fun to come)
| Title: Magical Assistance
| 18 Aug 2014 11:35 am
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| Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous)
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Soooo many of the Snape personality characteristics are coming out in Harry already! Dumbledore was right. Plus, he is so much more mature - but that could easily be put down to the way he grew up. Love the mild pranking on Minerva!
| Title: The New Routine
| 18 Aug 2014 9:44 am
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| Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous)
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Severus truly is doing a pretty good job as a dad - he is teaching Harry valuable critical thinking skills, though he is doing a harsh job of it as well - tougher than most would be capable of managing. Good thing it's Harry, with the combination of DNA and environment he has grown up under.
| Title: Home Again
| 18 Aug 2014 9:12 am
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| Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous)
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Actually, quite proud of Harry, for getting rid of the cigarettes. Wonder if the addiction takes hold that quickly? It didn't seem like he's really had that many... but then, I guess we don't really know how many he'd had over the summer, to survive hi starvation. Honestly, neglect and emotional abuse are just the other sides of the (3-sided!) coin to physical abuse - I cannot really feel sorry for the Dursleys either; they had already trained Dudley to be a sociopath, as they clearly were themselves.
| Title: On Distinguishing Evil From Vice
| 17 Aug 2014 2:42 pm
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| Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous)
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Remus has a valid point. People all have a breaking point.
| Title: Childhood Memories
| 17 Aug 2014 2:07 pm
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| Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous)
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It's true - no one can do anything anymore - the Dursleys are dead. And, Harry clearly is damaged. Dumbledore deserves to feel immensely guilty, and more. I also got the implications of Remus thinking Harry is being 'groomed' by Severus - old lover's jealousy dies hard!
| Title: Tension and Boredom
| 17 Aug 2014 12:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Re-reading happily. This is such a classic. I prefer Snarries, but every now & then, I like a good Severitus - type. Weird, huh?
| Title: Epilogue
| 03 Jun 2014 12:40 pm
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| Reviewer: cztelnik (Anonymous)
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An incredible story! Very happy it is finished here as I discovered it on another site partially posted.
Thank you for sharing your brainchild.
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