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Reviews For Blood Magic
Title: The New Routine 23 Dec 2009 7:43 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. I can see this classroom interaction with his father is going to be very hard on Harry, possible Severus as well. Draco, well he's just Draco. Thank you for the update.

    Author's Response: Yes, public interactions will be a strain for a while. :-)
Title: Public Opinion 23 Dec 2009 3:47 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Snape is really jealous of Lupin's attention, isn't he? It's too cute.

    Imagine Snape saying that to Harry, just to keep him away from Lupin. I wonder if he really believes ti.

    I love how protective Snape is getting. Great chappie.
Title: Extracurricular Activities 22 Dec 2009 8:23 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I want to read the entire story before I reviewed....you have had me on the edge of my seat a times. I so love the easy humor between Harry and Severus. No keen on the Harry/Hermione parting, never liked it so it's a problem with me, not your writing......I look forward to your next chapter.

    Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for the comment.
Title: Extracurricular Activities 22 Dec 2009 6:49 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is a long-time favorite of mine. I am glad that you are posting it here. I am enjoying re-reading it.

    Author's Response: Thanks, and enjoy!
Title: Extracurricular Activities 22 Dec 2009 4:25 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw, I really felt for Severus in this chapter and my heart broke with the line about only teaching himself steel and ice--that was very poignant. And even more so as he whispers, "Dear child". Loved that. I hope someday Harry gets to really know that Severus cares for him.

    I'm enjoying the complicated H/Hr relationship as well.

    Author's Response:

    Severus has some problems with expressing positive emotions, doesn't he? ;-)

     

    Thanks for the comment!

Title: Home Again 21 Dec 2009 9:27 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oy, Myrtle.
Title: Extracurricular Activities 21 Dec 2009 9:26 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "already he was acting suspicious[ly]"

    'Tis an adverb.

    Author's Response: Well, no. If it was an adverb, it would modify the verb. I want the verb to connect the subject to a modifier, so I'm using "act" in the sense of "seem to be", for which my unabridged dictionary gives the example of "he acted angry". "He acted angrily" would be a perfectly valid sentence, but it would mean something else -- that the subject acted with anger. Similarly, I would tend to read "he was acting suspiciously" as "he was acting with or from suspicion". Harry is appearing suspicious (in the sense of being worthy of suspicion), so the form I want really is "he was acting suspicious."
Title: Poisons 21 Dec 2009 6:07 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, this is so cute. Snape getting parental! LOL!

    Love it.
Title: The Ring 21 Dec 2009 5:55 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is promising to be an interesting relationship between the two, isn't it?

    Well...I mean, I've read it before, but when you read it the second time, you can really pick up on brilliant little descriptions and dialogue that I missed the first time.

    Author's Response: Great! I'm glad there's new parts to find. I'm enjoying all your comments -- thanks for reviewing. :-)
Title: The Dungeons 21 Dec 2009 5:43 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Harry's out of there. But I'm sure Harry is wondering if he's not jumped out of the kettle, only to jump into the hot cauldron! LOL.

    On to the next chappie. I'm so enjoying rereading this story..

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, it didn't seem like a good trade, at first!

     


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