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Title: The Custody Hearing 13 Jan 2010 10:01 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that the custody hearing went fairly well. It was a really nice touch when Harry cut his hair to honor Severus; I know that it certainly affected all those who witnessed it and drove his point home.

    I hope that they enjoy their ice cream! Harry was right about not letting Voldemort dictate their lives; life isn't worth living if you only worry about being safe and don't enjoy it.

    Author's Response:

    And that's one of the many things Harry has to teach Severus!

    Thank you for all the comments. :-)

Title: The Custody Hearing 13 Jan 2010 8:32 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    aw! so cute!! I loved the fact that Harry cut his hair, and the fact that Sevvy poo liked it! And it's 1:30 am again, and I have school tomorrow. Damn. I suppose you won't take write a note to my teachers telling them you're the reason I keep falling asleep in class, huh?

    Author's Response:

    :-) I doubt it would help!

    Thanks, though. 

Title: The Custody Hearing 13 Jan 2010 8:20 am
Reviewer: Kerry (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I absolutely adoreee this story! I loveee the way you've handled the Draco-Harry relationship and Harry's evolution into a real wizard-born heir. Soo excellent! Your fluid and mature understanding of the relationships between the trio is impeccable. I have to say I'm really hoping that things improve with Draco sooner rather than later (maybe a Fealty spell with role reversal), and perhaps a reconciliation with Olivia as well? I'm sooo eager to follow along with the story! Excelllenttt work! I loveee the way you had each character mature in a way that showed the perils of both wartime and adulthood.

    Author's Response: Thank you! There's a little more of both Draco and Olivia.
Title: The Custody Hearing 13 Jan 2010 6:33 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter! I was riveted the entire time. The interplay of all the subtle emotions throughout was stunning; you really have a way with works, using so little to convey so much. One of my favorite parts in this whole story--Harry chopping off his hair and that line he used. Gah! Nearly killed me. And I love that Severus loved it. Wonderful, beautiful. Thanks!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I read through the mail that atropos_lee and I exchanged during this, and there were more than a dozen messages over this chapter. We both really wanted it to be worthy of the build up.

    The hair though ... that was in the works from before when Harry bought the knife! :-)

Title: The Morning After 12 Jan 2010 3:56 pm
Reviewer: ShibuNoNeko (Signed) [Report This]
    Do you know what the worst part of reading 80 chapters in less than 24 hours is? It's the fact that you've gotten used to that there's always unread chapters awaiting so you're able to manage the suspension>.< I really hate cliffies! But overall a great chapter^_^ Though I feel really sad about the turn in Harry and Draco's relationship, but Harry should have known better! I just hope that they'll manage to get over it.

    Author's Response:

    Hee! It's rough when you've been reading along, and the story suddenly stops. I've done that!

    Anyway, the next chapter is up now, and I'll post the rest tomorrow or tomorrow and Thursday.  Enjoy! 

Title: The Morning After 12 Jan 2010 10:54 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I do hope that Harry and Draco's friendship can be repaired. Harry was foolish to ask that of Draco and should have trusted him a bit more. What he should have done was partnered with him, without adding the spell into it. At least Harry feels bad about what he did and I'm sure that he won't ever do it again.

    Now we just need to see what will happen after the hearing. Fudge isn't going to be happy, that's for sure, and there's nothing he can do about it. I wonder how many people will take it badly and how many will take it in stride. The Slytherin's in particular are going to be surprised. I can't wait to see what's coming!

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks! There's another one up now -- two more to go.
Title: The Halloween Ball 12 Jan 2010 5:46 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, so I know I've never reviewed you before, but this is one of my favorite fanfics, and I just had to tell you that this is one of the most memorable fanfic quotes I've ever come across:

    "Traditional for what?" Severus was at least managing to sneer, now. "Prostitution?"

    "Er ... clubbing."

    "Muggles fight in that?" McGonagall exclaimed.

    "No, going to clubs, that means. Dance clubs."

    McGonagall smiled triumphantly at Severus. "There, you see? You really should learn to be more culturally tolerant, Severus."

    The 'culturally tolerant' part nearly laughs me to tears every single time. I love Snape's reaction to the outfit and his insinuation about the outfit being suitable for prostitution is just too funny.

    Thank you so much for creating this fanfic moment-I get the giggles whenever I think about it.

    Love the fic; thanks for posting it here! We'll definitely give it the attention it deserves!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Hee! I'm bouncing that you like that part. It's one of my favorite light moments.

    Thanks for commenting!

Title: The Morning After 12 Jan 2010 5:44 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Another cliffie! Oh that was so sweet.

    I love that Harry called Severus "Dad", and it was so natural, not too soon, and perfectly believalbe. I love that he still thinks of all the ways that James is his dad too.

    As, you see I really need a sequel to this, because I can't imagine not having this universe to enjoy.

    I'm so sad that the story is nearing the end. I know this is about the fourth time I've read it, but I enjoy it each time, like I'm reading it for the first time!

    Please consider a sequel, or perhaps a couple of side stories maybe.

    I'd love to see Harry and Severus' life AFTER Severus acknowledges Harry. It would just be so nice to see them bond more, and maybe Severus form a relationship with Remus. There are just so many possibilities.

    Anyway, I know that you've probably moved on, but I just want you to know this story is always right up there at the top of the list, when I think of Severitus' stories! It's a classic.

    Okay okay, enough of the mush, I want more story!! The hearing!! Yeah, can't wait!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

     

    Yeah, I really didn't want the "Dad" to be too soon. I've been trying to show Severus's frustration with Harry formality for a while.... 

    I actually have a mostly-written short story in this universe, and have for a while, but I dusted it off recently. Perhaps I'll finish it, this time. 

Title: The Morning After 12 Jan 2010 5:40 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *claps mightily* That was a lovely 'dad' discussion. And I'm so sad Draco is so mad, by the way! I mean, I know he has a right to be and it would be odd if he wasnt', but I want him to forgive Harry. I just loved the two of them!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Serpent's Tongue 11 Jan 2010 10:17 pm
Reviewer: ShibuNoNeko (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So sorry about not reviewing your earlier chapters but I just found this one yesterday morning and I just couldn't stop reading. I needed to know what happened next^_^ It's the best Severus-is-Harry's-father stories I've ever read! Besides the great and weel planned plot I really like your characterization (especially Sev, Harry and Draco^^). You've managed to make Harry more slytherin but subtle and not overly OOC as I often find him in other stories. And I just love Draco, he's clever, witty and it just seems right when he interacts with Harry. And I like Sev for a lot of the same reasoning as I like Draco^_^
    All this being said, I hope you update soon. I'd like to see peopels reaction when they are told about Harry and Severus relationship^^

    Author's Response:

    :-) Well, any writer likes to hear that you couldn't stop reading!

    I should have time to put another chapter up later tonight. Thank you for the review!


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