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Reviews For Evan
Title: We All Have Sorrow 19 May 2010 9:58 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful start. I wonder how i missed this story.
Title: We All Have Sorrow 20 Dec 2009 8:00 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I sm so glad harry wont remember the abuse. Can't wait to read next chapter.

    Author's Response: He won't remember the abuse, but he'll be affected by it.  I dunno, that might be even worse. 
Title: We All Have Sorrow 20 Dec 2009 3:07 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, I think it really hit me that this was a new child when we didn't hear about the green eyes. So interesting and it makes sense knowing that Severus put his hair in it hence his DNA.
    Is the song Lean on Me?

    Author's Response: The song that the chapter titles get their names from is lean on me.  However, each chapter has its own song, if that makes sense.  Lyrics are built into it.
Title: We All Have Sorrow 19 Dec 2009 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is very good. I've read a lot of de-aging stories, but this one is very clever and well done.

    Author's Response: Thank you.  I tried to make it different from the others that are out there.
Title: We All Have Sorrow 19 Dec 2009 8:46 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Damn. Poor Evan.
    The description of his injuries is worrisome.
    Is he half blind after all this?

    Author's Response: I hadn't thought about whether Evan should be half blind, although it is an interesting thing to consider since Harry was blind when he was reincarnated.  I'm glad that you noticed the injuries, no one's asked about them yet :P.  Hopefully I'll have another chappie up soon.
Title: We All Have Sorrow 19 Dec 2009 8:40 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I can't wait to see how Severus copes with Harry's passing and Evan, who already appears to be much changed from Harry. I hope he's able to fulfill his promise to Harry and become a great father.

    I'm so excited for this fic--please update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Wow.  People don't usually tell me they're excited by my fanfics.  I'm glad that you are, though, that's really encouraging.  I'll try to get through another chapter tonight.  I'm trying to do a couple of pages a night so that I don't have an excuse to quit.  Now that I've beaten NaNoWriMo, I know it's possible to finish stuff, so no excuses (hopefully!)

    I'm glad that you can tell already that Evan is different.  That's kind of an important part of the story- just because Evan came from Harry doesn't mean Evan is Harry. 

Title: We All Have Sorrow 19 Dec 2009 8:04 pm
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    OK now that I read the chapter..While a little flimsy, I think that Sev's story is entirely plausible. I'm a little surprised that Dumbledore didn't know about the potion ahead of time.

    I really can;t wait to see where you take this story :-)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review.

    I sort of explained Dumbledore not knowing in this last chapter...  Actually I didn't at all, but I showed his reaction to the fact that he didn't know, so that counts for something, right?   

    In any case, thank you very much for your encouragement.

    ~Cait

Title: We All Have Sorrow 19 Dec 2009 7:59 pm
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    I haven't read the chapter yet, but I'm guessing the song is Lean On Me, but for the life of me I can't remember the artist...I'm listening to the version from the Glee soundtrack :-)

    Author's Response: Haha.  Lean on me is the overarching song (and thus the names of the chapters), but each chapter has an individual song that goes with it. 
Title: We All Have Sorrow 19 Dec 2009 7:42 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry/Evan. He must be so scared and confused.

    I'm anxious to know how old he is too. Nice work. I'm looking forward to more.
Title: We All Have Sorrow 19 Dec 2009 7:20 pm
Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

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