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Title: But if we are Wise 11 Oct 2013 5:29 am
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed) [Report This]
    I do feel that if Severus had not brewed that potion then Harry might have found another way to achieve a second chance at a childhood that he never had. Hope Severus won't be charged with his murder or something. After all hasn't Harry offered up enough for the wizarding world - he deserves something from them for a change?
Title: But if we are Wise 19 May 2010 10:29 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, cute. :) I thought that he might be 6, but 4 is a cute age. Great story.
Title: But if we are Wise 21 Dec 2009 4:05 am
Reviewer: murgy31 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was so awesome! Please update soon...
Title: But if we are Wise 20 Dec 2009 7:10 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for a fast update! I love how panicked Severus got--he seems to be taking the parenting thing really seriously, which is good that he's living up to his commitment to Harry. Harry must not have told Dumbledore what he planned to do though; I get the feeling that Dumbledore isn't very happy now that he's learned what just happened.

    Too late now though.

    Yay for Severus show Harry affection openly, even though it's not what he's used to. And poor Harry, I felt so bad for him when he felt safe in the closet. It must be so weird for him to not understand where his feelings are coming from.

    I could really get used to daily updates *hint hint*. Please update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Daily updates would be nice, wouldn't they?  I am attempting it, although who knows what will happen when school starts back up again.  I might end up making this fic kind of short, just so that I can be all happy and say "hey, i finished one"!  I've found that small encouragements make me do better in the future.  I might make it into a series tho.  I'm not sure. 

     

    Thank you for your reviews.  They are incredibly encouraging :)

Title: But if we are Wise 20 Dec 2009 5:28 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's a very intersting fic so far. I like the idea of a Resurrection Potion! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: But if we are Wise 20 Dec 2009 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Evan. So scared, and not sure why.

    I think that contrary to Snape's beliefs, he's going to make a good father. He was really scared that he'd lost Harry/Evan.

    This is very original. I'm looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: I'm glad for all the positive reviews.  P  I hope Snapers will be a good papa, we'll have to see.
Title: But if we are Wise 20 Dec 2009 1:25 pm
Reviewer: GenkaiFan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am interested to see where this is going.

    A word of advice. Try to think English when writing. You have Severus Snape asking, "Where are you buddy?" this is too American and a proper Englishman like Snape would never say 'buddy.' he would ask, "Where are you child?"

    --GF

    Author's Response: Thank you for the advice.  I'm not sure how well I can un-Americanize myself.  I've never been to England.  I can try, however, and comments like yours will help.  I will change the word "buddy" when I get a chance
Title: But if we are Wise 20 Dec 2009 9:28 am
Reviewer: lyra (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so in love with this story. Please continue!

    Author's Response: Will do... But you totally need to continue Filling the Void, alright? It's my fav, and it hasn't been updated in... forever
Title: But if we are Wise 20 Dec 2009 8:06 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How sad that instinct told harry (evan) to sleep in the closet. I know snape will help him grow up happy.

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