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Reviews For Evan
Too late now though. Yay for Severus show Harry affection openly, even though it's not what he's used to. And poor Harry, I felt so bad for him when he felt safe in the closet. It must be so weird for him to not understand where his feelings are coming from. I could really get used to daily updates *hint hint*. Please update soon! -P.G. Author's Response: Daily updates would be nice, wouldn't they? I am attempting it, although who knows what will happen when school starts back up again. I might end up making this fic kind of short, just so that I can be all happy and say "hey, i finished one"! I've found that small encouragements make me do better in the future. I might make it into a series tho. I'm not sure.
Thank you for your reviews. They are incredibly encouraging :)
I think that contrary to Snape's beliefs, he's going to make a good father. He was really scared that he'd lost Harry/Evan. This is very original. I'm looking forward to more. Author's Response: I'm glad for all the positive reviews. P I hope Snapers will be a good papa, we'll have to see.
A word of advice. Try to think English when writing. You have Severus Snape asking, "Where are you buddy?" this is too American and a proper Englishman like Snape would never say 'buddy.' he would ask, "Where are you child?" --GF Author's Response: Thank you for the advice. I'm not sure how well I can un-Americanize myself. I've never been to England. I can try, however, and comments like yours will help. I will change the word "buddy" when I get a chance
Author's Response: Will do... But you totally need to continue Filling the Void, alright? It's my fav, and it hasn't been updated in... forever
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