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Reviews For Evan
Title: And I'll Be Your Friend 31 Dec 2009 7:37 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Poor Evan--I don't even know what to say! He tried so hard to keep everything clean, yet he seems to have made a bigger mess than before. Severus really needs to be keeping a better eye on him. I thought he would have learned by now! Well, hopefully this incident will show him that Harry cannot be let out of his sight.

    I was so excited that you updated--I hope to read more soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: You would think he would learn...  but he thought that Harry would listen to his directions, and his house was warded, so it wasn't as dangerous as Hogwarts.  He's starting to learn what kind of trouble four year olds can get into, though
Title: When You're Not Strong 24 Dec 2009 8:56 am
Reviewer: RickmanFan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i think its great!
    Feel very sorry for evan
Title: When You're Not Strong 24 Dec 2009 12:40 am
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very cute. Poor Harry, is the thanks you thing left over from the dursley's.
Title: When You're Not Strong 24 Dec 2009 12:17 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely little chapter although rather distressing in parts I hope we get an explanation about thank you
Title: When You're Not Strong 23 Dec 2009 7:30 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant story so far... can't wait for more
Title: When You're Not Strong 23 Dec 2009 3:26 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I am thinking that Harry had to say "Thank you" alot to the Dursleys even when they were either hurting him or starving him.

    He would associate the words with pain and abuse and the sick feeling in his stomach that since he was having to say "thank you" that maybe somehow, he deserved the pain.

    He and Severus have a long way to go.

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you're intrigued =)
Title: When You're Not Strong 23 Dec 2009 3:12 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Very curious--I wonder what this thing about 'thank you' is all about. I'm surprised that Evan was okay when Snape was gone; I didn't think he would be. I suppose he can surprise me once in a while though.

    I hope Severus is able to figure some of these things out that concern his son. Not being able to say 'thank you' might be a hard thing to live with, especially when Severus is trying to teach the boy manners.

    I look forward to more! Thanks for all of the fast updates!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad that you are enjoying it, and I'm glad that the chapter has left you curious.

    As for Evan being alright with Snape being gone, it does show that he is a bit more trusting than you might have thought... Sometimes. Like most children, Evan will be sort of contradictory at times-- he might be okay this time and throw a fit the next time.  It's hard to say. 

Title: When You're Not Strong 23 Dec 2009 1:22 pm
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am as perplexed as Snape-I love the interaction between him and Evan

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you're still guessing.
Title: When You're Not Strong 23 Dec 2009 9:22 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Could it be that in old harrys life the dursleys made him thank them for either punishments or food. They were sick people. Love this story and the quick posts. thanks!

    Author's Response: Those are good guesses =) I'm glad that you're enjoying this so far.
Title: When You're Not Strong 23 Dec 2009 6:06 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    its wonderful! I wonder what is behind Evan's fear of those words.

    Author's Response: You'll have to wait to find out (and yes, I did actually think it through. What an idea :P)

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