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Reviews For Evan
I love the deep emotions of this fic. -P.G. Author's Response: Haha, Poor Sev, right? He expects the boy to be able to tell him what's wrong, and of course Evan doens't have any idea what's going on. Perhaps he does need to look into Harry's old life, I hadn't yet decided how much he should now about it. Thank you for the review and the encouragement. I really appreciate it. ~Cait
Author's Response: Lol. I love that song!! (and yes, of course you are correct). Glad that you liked the chapter :)
Too late now though. Yay for Severus show Harry affection openly, even though it's not what he's used to. And poor Harry, I felt so bad for him when he felt safe in the closet. It must be so weird for him to not understand where his feelings are coming from. I could really get used to daily updates *hint hint*. Please update soon! -P.G. Author's Response: Daily updates would be nice, wouldn't they? I am attempting it, although who knows what will happen when school starts back up again. I might end up making this fic kind of short, just so that I can be all happy and say "hey, i finished one"! I've found that small encouragements make me do better in the future. I might make it into a series tho. I'm not sure.
Thank you for your reviews. They are incredibly encouraging :)
I think that contrary to Snape's beliefs, he's going to make a good father. He was really scared that he'd lost Harry/Evan. This is very original. I'm looking forward to more. Author's Response: I'm glad for all the positive reviews. P I hope Snapers will be a good papa, we'll have to see.
A word of advice. Try to think English when writing. You have Severus Snape asking, "Where are you buddy?" this is too American and a proper Englishman like Snape would never say 'buddy.' he would ask, "Where are you child?" --GF Author's Response: Thank you for the advice. I'm not sure how well I can un-Americanize myself. I've never been to England. I can try, however, and comments like yours will help. I will change the word "buddy" when I get a chance
Author's Response: Will do... But you totally need to continue Filling the Void, alright? It's my fav, and it hasn't been updated in... forever
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