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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
keep up the great work :) Author's Response: :0) LOL. So'm I. Thanks for the review!!
Thanks for the update. V. Author's Response: LOL that would be fun. Like, by the way, you have the great honor of addressing his HIGHNESS Harry-she, heir to the Unseelie Court. Please be respectful, but have a nice day. It really is a shame that Harry's such a nice guy...
Lupin & Harry : While I have never liked Lupin and always found him to be a coward, I find Harry's attitude hypocritical. He himself did not wish to tell them the truth - even if we attribute that to his wishing to stay away from the royal court/ still being in adjustment period. But even now, he is pretending to be not eating raw meat or that his daughter does not feed on blood. I have to agree with Remus that Harry has always had a bank full of money and even when he becomes a people, he is a prince. Ofcourse, he always gets humungous responsibilities along with these perks- a prophecy, a daughter. But the point remains that he never needs to choose - he can stay in the best of both world - human and fae unlike numerous like Lupin who have to make a living for themselves and they have chosen one. And it is his fundamental right to choose how and where he wishes to spend his life - any adjustments that he makes for that is also his perspective. Harry in general always has had this problem - even in the novels, he is always of the view that he is correct, has the right way of thinking , does the right thing and anyone not agreeing to him can't understand. That said, I like the chapter. I like Remus-Harry confrontation as well. I have never really been a fan of Ginny but well.... I am sure she will be fine. Guess Hermione will find out about Harry-Tobias soon enough with Harry's letter. Also, I had always thought that Voldemort was the one sending Harry visions - so can Harry still have those visions even though Voldemort does not really know where he is? In that case, can't Voldemort read his mind? All in all, nice chapter..... Thanks for the update. I was missing it ..... Author's Response: I have to disagree with you. Harry did not intend to let everybody know everything yet, no, but he probably would have eventually, and now that he's BEEN revealed, he's not going back to wearing his charms around those people who don't know. So he's not revealing everything all at once, so what? He just wants to do it without scaring people unnecessarily. I agree with you that he could have been more understanding of Lupin's perspective, but I do think that his own actions are reasonable. As for Voldemort reading his mind, you'd have to ask JKR. Harry got visions at Grimmauld place in Canon, so I'm just following that. Anyway, thanks for the review!! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. I am, too. :0)
I think what I liked the most is how Harry tried to explain to Lupin that they were People, and not humans. It just showed that things had changed for Harry and that he had accepted it. Author's Response: Yup, that was a formatting error. Thanks for the heads-up - I fixed it. :0) Thanks for reviewing, too!! I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! I'm glad you liked the chapter! And thanks for the formatting heads-up. I think that problem got fixed. Thanks again! Rhiannan
Author's Response: Hey!! Glad you liked, and thanks a lot for the heads-up. That was a mistake. And thanks for the review!!
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! Sorry updates have been coming so slow. |
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