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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
HAHAHAHAHAHA! Trelawney is doping them up every class. Weeee! Draco's an Elf. HAHAHAHA! Oh gosh "a Noblemen" huh? I can't wait to see his face. . . . Now Snape's behavior in that situation is what really interested me. That was definitely atypical Snape behavior (or maybe I'm reading waay too much into it) I'm thinking either he really was only trying to protect Draco from his own stupidity, or the elf/fae standoff with a fae child involved kicked Snape's instincts off (assuming he has instincts) and made him all snarly towards Draco, or Snape was having a Grandpa moment and metaphorically beating his chest, or hell, maybe it was his own child's upset that was setting him off. That'd be nice. I'd like to see Snape all protective. But then I'd also like to see Snape cruelly reject them (I looove angst) so don't listen to me either way. I kinda agree with Snape about not having a baby in a potion's class but its not like Tobias has much choice. Umbridge!!! NOOOO!!! Oh. My. Gosh. That little rant is just the thing to set Hermione on Tobias' tail. She's a total freak like that. If she doesn't at least suspect who he is, I'll be shocked. The only reasons she wouldn't come to the conclusion that he is Harry Potter are 1) she doesn't know about 'Switches' 2) Harry doesn't have a kid or a girlfriend. 3) Harry's not a magical creature and she might be prejudiced enough to not associate Harry with the scary fae guy. The whole being royal thing could be enough to throw her off if it becomes known. Harry Potter's not a prince after all. Poor Harry. It pissed me off in the books and it pisses me off here. Umbitch is a freaking nightmare but its Harry who gets yelled at by the other teachers and told to shut up and keep his head down. Not. Cool. My poor adorable Harry. Author's Response: Hellos!! Thanks again for the lovely looooooong review!! LOL yeah, poor Harry. I do think the adults have a point, though - they don't know just how badly Umbridge is treating him, but it makes sense for them to tell him to keep his head down. Frustrating, but safer. :0)
Author's Response: Thanks!! So glad you like. Illtobe is a name purely out of my imagination. I wanted the shortened version to be 'Toby', but I didn't want him to be Tobias, for obvious reasons. I'd heard the name 'Tobe' before somewhere, and so just modified it to Illatobe. I like it, too. :0)
Sprout frowned. “You're not a delinquent. That's what is so frustrating.” My favorite lines!!! Harry has set a record that even the twins did do. Malfroy an elf, interesting. Thank you for your update. Well written chapter. I look forward to your next update. Author's Response: Glad you like!! Thanks so much for the review!! And you're very welcome!!
I did notice one typo in the beginning. “No,” Tobias said confusedly, “no, that's fine. It's a little strange, but if the Headmaster wants it than it's not a problem to me.” than should be then. I went and edited the formatting of the last couple of chapters so that they would have paragraph indentations. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, and the edit. I'll go fix it. Also thanks for fixing the formatting. That's really helpful. Glad you like!! Thanks again!
Author's Response: :0) Thanks!! I'm really glad you like it!! Yeah, I like Sprout, too. I was surprised, because I didn't like her much in Canon, but then when I had to turn her into a more complex character to actually write her, I ended up liking her quite a bit. Dunno why. :0) Thanks for the review!
Keep the good work gong !!! Author's Response: Lol don't worry. Snape will be more involved soon. Thanks for the review! Glad you like!
Author's Response: Yey!! So glad you like so much!!! Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm so glad you like it!!
Author's Response: :0) Glad you like!!
I'm really liking that Harry/Tobias is thinking a bit better than he did in canon and I cringe to think how his detention with umbridge will go... and i do like the Puff angle. Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the 'heads up'! The fic never did show up on the recent page. I emailed Obsidianembrace and she fixed it for me. And thanks for the review! |
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