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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
Title: Delinquent 01 Dec 2010 8:06 am
Reviewer: Ravenel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You have the right to be happy, proud, ecstatic, any form of joy or what so else because this is an AMAZING story. I love it. I REALLY hope it continues in a sequel or what so else.
Title: Delinquent 21 Aug 2010 9:48 pm
Reviewer: H20girl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it! So, Zabini is some sort of royal fae, even as Malfoy is nobility. Usually I hate the 'royalty' stories but this is great! i wonder if somehow Snape is connected to the Court, and he is going to let the King & Queen know Harry/Tobias is in some danger from Umbridge. Also, I wonder if Zabini is a real, honest 'good guy' or a peer who is only out for himself. Can't wait to read your next chapter...just had to review first!

    Author's Response: Yey, glad you like!! Thanks so much for taking the time to review!! I'm really enjoying reading them!!
Title: Delinquent 10 Aug 2010 6:00 am
Reviewer: Chris K (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I find myself torn...I want to demand more, cause wow....but then I also read your other story and it is drawing to an end. Lets make a deal, you never stop writing and I shall never stop reading. In the words of my darling one, "its a good deal, its a done deal."

    Author's Response: LOL we'll see. Part of my reason for writing fanfiction is a sort of half-way point towards writing my own fantasy novels, so I don't know if I will be writing more fanfics after Outcast's Alley is over. I might, but for the moment I'm out of ideas. (I actually like writing two at once, and so would probably be doing so if I could come up with a good idea for another fic). That said, though, I WILL finish Outcast's Alley. It might get to be as long as LADTH, but it will not be abandoned. Thanks for the review!! Glad you like!!
Title: Delinquent 09 Aug 2010 12:11 pm
Reviewer: Blue Moon (Signed) [Report This]
    Cant wait for the next chapter!! and i hope you update soon, i like the fact that people are begining to find him out and i'm loving the interaction with snape. i would have reviewd sooner but i have been away and didnt know how to on my mobile, so i re-read it several times :)

    Author's Response: LOL Glad you like!! Thanks so much for the review! (And I love it when people reread my stuff!) :0)
Title: Delinquent 08 Aug 2010 1:43 am
Reviewer: wondergal (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Update! NOW! ....Please?

    I absolutely canNOT wait until the next chapter! Seriously, I check your story everyday on this site and FF.Net. Hurry before I drive myself insane with anticipation!

    Author's Response: LOL glad you're so excited. Thanks for the review, and enjoy the next chapter.
Title: Delinquent 06 Aug 2010 12:57 pm
Reviewer: Butterbutt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    . . . he sat down and agreed to do the lines. I can't believe it. I can't believe Umbridge actually had the nerve to hand over the bloodquill to a ten foot tall Fae and I also can't believe Harry didn't bite her f****** head off.

    Wow. Okay and he's planning to rat her out to the Fae. Can we say 'international incident'? This has a HUGE chance of blowing up in his face. I mean, a human 'tortures' the prince of the Fae? That's like . . . a declaration of war or something. Harry, I sure hope you know what you're doing.

    Poor Harry. :( He's having a hard time getting his school work done. And ahhh, the puffs are so sweet.

    Oh dear. And Draco again. Suck it Malfoy. I can't wait to see his face. I NEVER understood how the Wizarding world can be chalk FULL of illusions and invisibility cloaks and extendable ears and polyjuice potion and yet EVERYONE takes EVERYTHING at face value. Blows me away.

    Okay, Zabini is something or other. Countdown has begun.

    I like how Snape got all mad over the bloodquill buuuuut I'm worried that the one time he lets things go Harry's way, it's all set to blow up into 'International Incident'. *crosses fingers* Counting down.

    Author's Response: :0) Glad you liked!! Thanks for the review!! Enjoy the next chapter!
Title: Delinquent 04 Aug 2010 4:46 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't remember if I've already reviewed this chapter, but if so, I'll say again that I love the development of the plotline, the growth of the character Tobias Batard, and the wonderful differences from Year Five canon. I do like the fact that Harry/Tobias has matured drastically over the course of the story, and yet reads as a teenager at the same time. He certainly acts with a lot more circumspection than did Harry in OOTP, regardless of Snape's opinion about things.

    I love the introduction of Blaise as a probable member of the Court (figuring out the rank of people by jewelry is kind of fun!), and when Flitwick greeted Tobias with an appropriate bow it made me grin imagining the scene in my head.

    Looking forward to what happens next.

    Well done!

    Author's Response: :0) Yey!! Glad you like!! Thanks for the nice long review!! Enjoy the next chapter!!
Title: Delinquent 03 Aug 2010 11:41 pm
Reviewer: harryphila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ohhhhhh, yes, I am so looking forward to "three days"... It's going to be the ultimate chaos all around! YAY

    Author's Response: LOL yup. Much fun. Thanks for the review!!
Title: Delinquent 03 Aug 2010 11:31 pm
Reviewer: SentinelHuntress (Signed) [Report This]
    ooooooookay two days till the message is on the way and three days of torture with Umbridge... *cackles*
    Sounds promissing ;)

    Author's Response: :0) Glad you like!! Thanks so much for the review!! Enjoy the next bit!
Title: Delinquent 03 Aug 2010 6:33 am
Reviewer: sweetpea26 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AHH! :) That was pretty awesome! I like the concept of the story and the way you go about developing the plot. Genius! I am REALLY anticipating future chapters. Please update soon!! As in ASAP!

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! Thanks so much for the review!! The next chapter will be out momentarily. I hope you like it!

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