I'm really curious as to what Tobias is planning to do to Umbitch. I hope that it will be spectacular, whatever it may be! I do hope that Snape will try to be a 'little' less nasty to Tobias. He knows full well that the boy needs to keep his daughter close and safe and that he will do just about anything to accomplish it.
Well, it seems that Blaise is like Tobias, or at least that is what I am theorizing. I assume that having two studs makes him royal as well, but with less status. It was nice of Blaise to give Tobias the time he needs. I have a feeling that it is to do with Umbitch...
It sounds like Tobias has an incredibly heavy work load. It is going to be difficult for him to keep up, particularly with having a baby to care for. Apparently, the staff at Hogwarts don't think that their students need free time to recharge their minds. Too much work will only frustrate their students...
Author's Response: Hehee nice long review. Much fun. Thanks so much!! Enjoy the next chapter!!
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| 02 Aug 2010 8:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Lily_flower1 (Anonymous)
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Wow. I gotta say, this is one of the most original "Harry-has-a-life-changing-summer" fics. It seriously blew my mind. Normally, I dislike stories where Snape is Harry's blood father, but you approached it in such a way that even when the whole dad issue came up, I just couldn't stop reading. Honestly, I would continue gushing about your story and how awesome it is, but I don't have the time, so I'll end with "Plz! Update ASAP!" :) Happy writing!
Author's Response: :0) YEY!!! So glad you like it so much!! Thanks so much for the review!! You made me smile. :0) Enjoy the next chapter!
*snickers softly* Bout time Tobias used his head. I don't think Snape will like it much, though, finding out that Tobias is royal. Especially if their relationship is what I think it is. Kudos on a well written chapter.
Author's Response: :0) LOL you'll see. Thanks for the review!! Enjoy the chapter!
I don't know how Harry's going to work out this schedule-- going to school full time without being able to utilize day care seems impossible. And what happens as the child grows? I'm very curious as to what the author will do with this problem.
On a different note, I can't wait to see what will happen next with Umbridge. It's such a painful part of cannon that she gets away with flaying students...they don't even try to fight her through official channels. It seems very wrongheaded-- as if all those kids are from abusive households. I like Snape's offer to have her arrested-- it's the kind of disgrace that would really hurt a career bureaucrat. I can only hope that Harry's idea really is better....
Author's Response: :0) Much fun!! Thanks for the review!! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! Enjoy the next chapter!!
Whooo hooooo! I absolutely love this chapter! I've only had 2 hours sleep in the past 30 or so hours and stayed up extra to read it, so I really need to sleep. I'll contiplate the story I'm sure and hopefully be able to give you a better review later.
Author's Response: LOL thanks for taking the time to review despite your ridiculously low amount of sleep. :0) Enjoy the next chapter!!
| Title: Delinquent
| 02 Aug 2010 5:47 am
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| Reviewer: Susana R (Anonymous)
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Wow what a great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!
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Nooooo!!!! I want more! Great, great chapter.
Author's Response: LOL thanks for the review. Enjoy the next chapter!
its really good
please update soon
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| 01 Aug 2010 9:22 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Oooh! I hope you have the next chapter finished already! The court vs. Umbridge-- even better than the centaurs! Ha! Also, I think Harry-- oops, TOBIAS needs to take another look through the royal family tree to see if he can locate Zabini... // I didn't care too much for this story in the beginning because I hated seeing Harry changing into some weird creature, but now I'm TOTALLY HOOKED. Excellent writing throughout! :-D
Author's Response: LOL glad you changed your mind. :0) Thanks for the review!!
Oh, I ca hardly wait to see what happens to Umbridge. And I'm wondering just what Zabini is. A most excellently written chapter.
Author's Response: :0) Thanks!! Glad you like it!! Enjoy the next chapter!!
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