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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
Author's Response: Yey!! So glad you like so much!!! Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm so glad you like it!!
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I'm really liking that Harry/Tobias is thinking a bit better than he did in canon and I cringe to think how his detention with umbridge will go... and i do like the Puff angle. Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the 'heads up'! The fic never did show up on the recent page. I emailed Obsidianembrace and she fixed it for me. And thanks for the review!
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Author's Response: :0) Yey!! Glad I was able to get you your 'fix' (pun very cheerfully intended) when you needed it. :0) Thanks for the review!
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Author's Response: :0) So many questions!! You'll just have to see. Thanks so much for the review!!
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I read your story for some time now and I must say, your story is really good. At first I thought it is one of the Superpower-Harry-Stories in which he is a mixture of at least two different species I really often encounters in German which is one of the reasons why I settled to read English stories. After I read the first few chapters you proved that thought of mine wrong because Harry really had problems with his new life. After a few more chapters I came to the conclusion that Snape is Harrys father and it seems wit every new chapter more fitting. So either my conclusion is true or you are really good to let people settle to false conclusions. Now to your new chapter. I really like the way Harry, no Tobias is now and the way he deals with problems. To purposely get into detentions only to say his opinion is something he did in the book also but in the book he tried to stop himself before he got into serious trouble. So six detentions in one day I count as a real improvement of character. It was really time he stood up against Snape and even if I like Snape, I must say it is good that someone voiced against his opinion. Because of this I would have liked to read about his detention with Snape in this chapter. So I have to wait for the next one. Shame on you, you have me checking my mails for your new chapter more often then I do now and I thought look for mails once or twice a hour would be bad. Beside the detentions I am eager to read more about Blaise and the other Slytherins and also about Harry dealing with the government. I hope he can convince them to stay at Hogwarts for his remaining years despite the fact that he is their heir. All I have to say now is, that this is the longest review I wrote in English and one of the longest reviews I ever wrote. I think it is even longer then some English tests some of my class hands in. I apologize for any mistakes or bad formulations but we learn only formal English in school and things I most likely will never use. I don't write reviews in general because I can't write the things I want down in German probably and write them in English is not really better but I really like your story and I will try to write more than this one. Kuroi Author's Response: :0) Thanks so much for the lovely long review!! I really enjoyed reading it, and I really appreciate the effort you put in. That said, I can read German, so if it would be easier you could just review in your native language. :0) Thanks again!! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!! |
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