Whoo! You updated: writers block is horrible- I got stuck for a while on one of my fics too- so kudos for overcoming it. Great chapter, with good character development and interesting twists. However, I did find the section with Harry's letter a little difficult as the paragraphs concerning Harry's thoughts were not always immediately distinguishable from the 'letter' paragraphs.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! I'm glad you liked the chapter! And thanks for the formatting heads-up. I think that problem got fixed. Thanks again! Rhiannan
Ouch. Very harsh of Harry, but he was right. Uhm, side note: after the message from the Court, all your words turned bold. I don't know if you meant to do that or not, just thought I'd point it out. Good chapter btw, Kudos.
Author's Response: Hey!! Glad you liked, and thanks a lot for the heads-up. That was a mistake. And thanks for the review!!
Yay! Update! I like this version of Harry, he seems more real as people then as human in the books.
Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! Sorry updates have been coming so slow.
| Title: Adolescent Boy
| 06 May 2010 4:27 pm
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| Reviewer: daxi (Signed)
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Fantastic story! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Yey! Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you liked it! So sorry it took me so long to respond!
| Title: Adolescent Boy
| 05 May 2010 9:30 pm
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| Reviewer: X (Anonymous)
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awwwww still no updates... i miss your updates...
Author's Response: Sorries. I had some serious issues with this chapter. I'm glad you like the fic. Rhiannan
| Title: Adolescent Boy
| 27 Apr 2010 10:07 pm
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| Reviewer: myscus (Anonymous)
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Wow fab fic. Remus Grrrr. I also think meeting the Court is realy important and Harry shouldn't hide from them much longer. Loving this update soon please.
Author's Response: Glad you like. The update'll be up soon.
| Title: Adolescent Boy
| 26 Apr 2010 2:50 am
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| Reviewer: mione713 (Anonymous)
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awesome story please update soon
Author's Response: :0) Thanks! And I'm trying!
| Title: One of Those
| 04 Apr 2010 5:49 am
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| Reviewer: jaworley (Anonymous)
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Oh my gosh. This is the awesomest story ever! This is such a clever and unique idea, and your writing style all makes it seem so plausible! And you have a very good sense of humor, I loved how Harry thought about his changes as he was going through them! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for the review! (and sorry it took me so long to respond!)
| Title: Adolescent Boy
| 03 Apr 2010 8:21 am
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| Reviewer: swetz (Signed)
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Oh! This is soo good!! Really can't wait to witness the talk between H-Tobias & Snape! Don't take too long to update...pretty please.. ^.^ (lol--> Mrs. Weasley..that was perfect)
Author's Response: YEY!! Glad you liked!! Thanks for the review!!!
| Title: Adolescent Boy
| 02 Apr 2010 11:34 pm
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| Reviewer: SH (Anonymous)
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-It's a mutiny.- Love that line :)
I enjoiy your story verrrrrrrrrrrrrrry much :)
Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond to this. It got lost somehow. Anyway so glad you like! Thanks!!
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