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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
Title: Adolescent Boy 02 Apr 2010 6:10 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhh...Will everything turn out alright with Tobias and Remus? I'd think that if anyone would understand him, it would be Moony. And Sirius? Will he be able to accept Tobias? And I'm starting to sound too much like one of my own Reviewers had been. This is a great chapter, Kudos on a job well done.

    Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond to this. It got lost somehow. Thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad that you are reading and enjoying this.:0)
Title: Adolescent Boy 02 Apr 2010 3:03 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Boy--I think Remus is in the "dog house" with our Harry. I don't blame him a bit. There were about a dozen different-more respectful-way Remus could have handled that and, well, he really did put his foot in it.

    Thanks for the update.
    V.

    Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond to this. it got lost somehow. I'm so glad you like the story! And you are very welcome!
Title: Adolescent Boy 02 Apr 2010 9:38 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that the Order did what was right and accepted Tobias as he is...wings and all. I guess his fears were unfounded..for the most part. I am really curious as to why Severus WASN'T at the meeting. What does he know?

    Remus was wrong to do what he did and expose him though. He should have a least spoken to Harry about it first. They will have to talk at some point, but a cool down period is probably a good idea.

    I kind of disappointed in Hermione's reactions to Harry. That she made flash judgements about him in that short meeting was obvious. It's really sad that those who are treated with bias often give it as well.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Yay!! Glad you liked!! Thanks so much for the review!!
Title: Adolescent Boy 02 Apr 2010 9:37 am
Reviewer: jlar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So happy to see a new chapter.
    I'm glad Molly was so good to Harry/Tobias. And wonder of wonders Arthur showed some backbone.
    I'm really aggravated with Remus - that was a very low blow that he gave Harry.
    I'm a bit worried about everyone in the Order knowing - they've had spies before. So how long before moldyshorts knows all about the new secrets?
    Thanks for a great chapter!

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! And you're very welcome!! I really love writing. :0)
Title: Adolescent Boy 02 Apr 2010 9:11 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome. I like Remus gave him away. I know that Remus is doing it for his own good and safety, but I think that it will take Harry some time to believe and understand that. Now who will tell Snape? And is Snape an Unseelie Sidhe? Does he know about them and the court?

    I am so relieved that Molly is accepting Harry, and that he can leave Mo with her. That is fabulous. I wonder if Hermione will figure it out. Harry almost called her Hermione, and the baby has wings... I liked how Harry kept referring to himself as a delinquent.

    Great story! thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! Thanks for the review!! :0)
Title: Adolescent Boy 02 Apr 2010 8:00 am
Reviewer: lia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have always wondered why authors make Hermione so friendly when she meets a new, disguised Harry when of the three of them, she is the worst at social skills, followed by Harry. Ron is pretty good at it actually. Glad to see that u did not stick to that route.

    Molly is great.
    I have never really liked Remus, actually like Sirius more than Remus. Sirius does what he thinks/feels like - there are no facades with him.
    I was surprised in the last chapter, well, not surprised really - that is how canon Harry has been always as well- that Harry was so rude and antagonistic to Snape even when he had just helped him out with Mo. I would feel undying gratefulness to the person who just cured my helpless 2 yr old daughter ( at least for a couple of days).
    Atleast, in this chapter, he has a slight, abstract sense that he should be grateful ( whether he is or not, is a diff matter altogether).

    Snape - I had previously thought that he was a dark fairy as well - wearing full dark cloaks, that covered him from wrist to neck to all body except his hands wrist down and face. No one cd see tattoos/ wings etc. But after Tonks' comment, I am no sure anymore.
    There had been a comment earlier as well that all fae are to eschew Dark Lord except those spying on them and I had thought that to be a reference to Snape.
    Also, is Snape is indeed a fae, DUmbledore might have got a clue here knowing what Snape was and his association with Lily.
    Well, I dont know now anymore.
    Keep writing.

    Author's Response: :0) Glad you liked, and glad I've got you wondering. Thanks for the review!!
Title: Adolescent Boy 02 Apr 2010 6:04 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you liked!!
Title: Adolescent Boy 02 Apr 2010 5:31 am
Reviewer: X (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awwww you just gotta love molly in moments like these :)

    Author's Response: :0) Glad you liked!
Title: Adolescent Boy 02 Apr 2010 5:23 am
Reviewer: Butterbutt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You know, there's a saying: three people can keep a secret if two of them are dead. Way to blow Harry's cover in front of a huge group of people, Remus. And why do I have the feeling that there was some sort of conversation while harry changed his shirt?

    Ahhh *blissful sigh* This story is like crack and I have my fix for the next couple of days.

    Author's Response: LOL, I'm glad you like it, though I'm hoping this is kinder, gentler, crack, with no withdrawal symptoms or bad side effects. :0)
Title: Tobias 02 Apr 2010 4:55 am
Reviewer: Butterbutt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    every day I go 'comeoncomeoncomeon' cross my fingers and hope for a new chapter and then go "ahhh darn it" and try again the next day. Well, today. WOOHOO!! I'm SO Excited and I haven't even read it yet. Weee!

    Author's Response: Lol this made me smile. Sorry it took me so long to respond. :0)

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