wow...this doesn't sound like an HP fanfic at all! good job, though, I loved it.
But maybe you should post it on your ff.net account? there's not much Snape interaction here. He is around just about as much as anyone else is. or is that gonna change...?
Copy editing note: I think you mean the queen's hair was in a chignon, not a chiffon.
Author's Response: That is true. I am an idiot. :0)
| Title: Unseelie Heir
| 29 Jun 2011 5:40 am
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| Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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wow, i was totally entranced by this story, really fantastic work and meticulous attention to detail, you really created a convincing world in this story that drew me in. thanks!
(although i was a bit sad for the lack of snape, but i hope to find him more in the sequel)
Cool story! Look forward to the next update.
| Title: Unseelie Heir
| 27 Apr 2011 3:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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Why were the only canon Hufflepuffs mentioned or shown in this story the late Cedric Diggory, Professor Sprout, and Tonks? Where were Justin Finch-Fletchley, Ernie Macmillan, Hannah Abbott, Susan Bones and Zacharias Smith?
I am totally and completely in love with this story!!! I just couldn't stop reading it!!! And I can't wait to see what happens next in the next one!!!
| Title: Unseelie Heir
| 01 Jan 2011 12:41 pm
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| Reviewer: topsell (Anonymous)
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Honestly, I need to go back and review every chapter but I was just flying through them so fast that I didn't stop long enough to rate anything.
This is the best creature!fic that I've honestly ever read. It's everything that I've looked for in the genre. The one and only thing I had an issue with was not dropping enough 'hints' about Snape in this 'book', though I do think you have a plan and am the edge of my seat - and will be, hopefully not for long - waiting for upcoming chapters!
Good luck and you are an extremely talented author! I'm thoroughly impressed with this piece!
OK, I'm hooked. You are an excellent author.
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