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Reviews For Outcast's Alley
Title: The One 08 Jan 2010 6:55 pm
Reviewer: harryphila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi,

    brilliant storry and very original! I haven't read any story with even a similar plot and I love it. I also like his independance and instincts. It'll be some surprise once the people who knew him before meet with him again. But if he is a fae, then Snape would be, too. How does he hide it all the time?

    Author's Response: Yey!! Glad you like!! And no worries - the genetics and everything will be explained.
Title: The One 08 Jan 2010 4:34 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon.

    Author's Response: Yey! Glad you like!! I'll update ASAP, but for the moment I'm working on Talking Hat. Thanks so much for the review!! :0)
Title: The One 08 Jan 2010 11:22 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    What?
    Is Harry the heir by blood or magic?
    And did Lily know about the fae changes that happened to Harry?

    Author's Response: No worries, all will be explained. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: The One 08 Jan 2010 9:50 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow..... what the heck?! Wow! Haha!!! I am LOVING it and I feel just like Harry. Marvelously done. I can't wait to read more! I want to know more about Harry's species, and this royal family and how he's going to take care of this baby. And why is he "The One"? and Why did the mom die? Awesome story so far! Please, please update when you can! I find that I don't even care about Snape at this point, your story and universe is so interesting. Maybe you should write your own book about this stuff, and leave the Hogwarts stuff out. :)

    Author's Response: Yey! Glad you like!! I'm actually writing this story with the idea of turning the world into another story, with another character, later on, (I would take down this story and clean it of any and all references to Harry Potter before publishing, of course) but I wanted to try it out first, and this fanfiction really wanted to get written, too. It's wonderful to hear you so enthused about it - I've been really excited about finally getting to write it, so I'm glad to see that people like the idea. :0) Thanks so much for your review!!
Title: Bastard 08 Jan 2010 9:26 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, poor kid. I actually liked how Harry decided that James was his father and how he poured the paternity potion down the sink. It was almost like "Nooo! The mystery is going to go on longer and torture me" but we all really know who the father is going to be. Right? Right?

    Fantastic story!

    Author's Response: LOL, not telling!! (I know something you don't know! Nyah nyah!) Glad you like! Thanks for the review!!
Title: The One 08 Jan 2010 9:20 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's Privet Drive, not Private Drive.

    Author's Response: Woah. I'm an idiot. Thanks for catching that.
Title: One of Those 08 Jan 2010 8:40 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool! Poor Harry! I wish he had written someone earlier, but i guess he's got to learn how to deal with it on his own first. I really like your original character, and even the Dursleys were really in character. Well done!

    Author's Response: Yeah, Harry's not the brightest on that point. I'm glad you like this so far! Thanks for the review!!
Title: Bastard 07 Jan 2010 6:29 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    It would have been awful if Harry couldn't stand the taste of chocolate again. I'm so glad he can still enjoy it. I am enjoying this very much, and look forward to your next chapter.

    Author's Response: Yey!! Go chocolate. So glad you're enjoying it!! I am, too. It's a lot harder to write then Talking Hat, but that also makes it more fun, in some ways. It's a nice balance between the two. :0) The update should be out sometime in the next two days. :0) Thanks so much for reviewing!! It makes me really happy to get review from the same person for both fics. :)
Title: Bastard 06 Jan 2010 5:02 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Interseting explanation but it does not explaint he wings I expect Severus will have to do that! Thank you for updating

    Author's Response: Nope, it doesn't. :0) We'll get there... Thanks for the review!! I love it when people read both stories!!
Title: Bastard 04 Jan 2010 10:16 am
Reviewer: feyathene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ha! I loved that last line! "I'm some sort of weird fae thing, and a bastard, and I don't look the same anymore, but I have chocolate."
    Go Harry, if chocolate's alright, things can't be a complete disaster, lol.
    In the beginning I loved the fact that all Harry's changes were gradual, but then you had to go all cliche on me and be like: "whoopah! wings and horns overnight on his birthday!" ...still, you still get points for at least trying to be plausible. Those points are totally reinforced by Harry's being upset with his mother, that totally rocks, and is, again, reasonable, as opposed to him accepting it with hardly a blink of an eye. On the whole, very good, I look forward to reading more of this story. I always enjoy a good creature fic. ^_^
    Unrelated, but, btw, I LOVED Harry's desperation to be better/loved in the last chapter of Talking Hat. ~sigh~ It was most heart-wrenching.
    On a last note: Ah, magically timed letters. Where would fanfiction be without them?

    Author's Response: Yey! Thank you for the nice long review!! Yeah, I definitely think chocolate makes a whole lot of things just a bit better. I didn't like the final big change, either, but the wings and horns had to break through eventually, so...I should also say the birthday thing was mostly coincidence. I needed him in Knockturn Alley on his birthday to get the letter. (And lol, yes, magically timed letters are SO convenient!) I'm really glad you like the fic so far. I'm really enjoying writing it. :0) And so glad you like Talking Hat, too! I love having people reading both my fics. :0) Thanks again for the review, and happy new year! Rhiannan

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