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Title: Chapter Two 27 May 2022 2:34 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This Dumbledore is evil, and Snape is amazing. I’m thoroughly enjoying this (and seriously hope Dursley gets what’s coming to him).
Title: Chapter Two 14 Jan 2017 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter but so sad that no one believes him!
Title: Chapter Two 08 Mar 2010 7:23 pm
Reviewer: Raiderhater1013 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well we got a very evil Dumbledore here as far as I can see.

    Author's Response:

    To be honest, I was always wary of Dumbledore, even while reading the Canon version. I find it very easy to characterize him this way. Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter Two 06 Jan 2010 5:18 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I agree with your writing about Albus in OoP he almost admitted to Harry that he knew he was unkindly treated but delt it was better for harry! Better for his plans of course I have never forgiven him for that no child should be made to go through what he did. Having got that off my chest I love your story thank you

    Author's Response:

    For Albus, the only thing that really mattered was 'the greater good' and he was willing to sacrifice anyone to achieve his goals, even an innocent child. The worst part of what he did, though, was not giving Harry the training, tools, and information he needed to truly succeed; much of what happened to Harry could have been prevented if he had. Harry was forced to muddle through.

    Thanks for reading and reviewing my story.

Title: Chapter Two 29 Dec 2009 1:27 am
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just discovered your fic and I really enjoy it. I especially like how you characterised Mrs. Figg. It makes her more interesting than in canon, where she is just a batty old lady who likes cats.
    And bastard!Albus is one of my favourite.

    Author's Response:

    I like bastard!Albus too. Honestly, I never trusted him even in canon.

    I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reviewing.

Title: Chapter Two 28 Dec 2009 8:06 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh he's so evil and I really like that in this story. It makes it so different and I love how supportive Arabella is of Harry and Severus.

    Harry is right, he will be safe with Severus, and yet I wonder why and how he recognizes Severus? Did Severus visit him back when he was still living with his parents? Or is there a deeper connection?

    Guess I'll have to wait and find out. I wish Severus would go and curse Vernon to hell. Sick *&^# . . .well you get the picture.

    Great job and please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Dumbledore is quite nasty this time, and don't worry, Vernon will get his eventually. As to Harry knowing Severus, I will get into that (in part) in the next chapter.

    Thanks for the lovely review!

Title: Chapter Two 28 Dec 2009 4:41 pm
Reviewer: Wrinkled_Fabric (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant start, I'm so hooked already. Snape is so sweet, wanting to have raised him and already planning Harry and his escape from Albus. I'm hoping Snape has a plan? They have a year before school starts, that's a long time for Albus to catch up to them.

    And love that Figg is willing to help both Harry and Severus.

    I can't wait for more
    fabsx

    Author's Response:

    I'm really glad you are enjoying my story. Severus is quite lovely, isn't he? :D As to a plan, well, not quite, but he is wonderful at working on the fly and is always prepared for such.....eventualities. Arabella, despite being rather shy, has quite the backbone when she must and she loves little Harry.

    Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter Two 28 Dec 2009 10:13 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder from where Harry knows Severus - I am really curious, so I hope the next chapter will be up soon!
    I wondered how Albus would know about Vernon's intentions (and inclination) - first I guessed that the piece on info was in Arabella's letter, but how would she know? 'Intentions wards' were a surprising solution, very neat and original. It makes Albus even worse, though, as it implies he knew the real state of abuse. Bad, bad Albus. Your Harry is more abused than canon Harry, as it is common in fanfics (that is no criticism, simply an observation). I still wonder how Severus would know that there was no night buses in Surrey; it is an unimportant thing, though, hardly worth explaining. Nice touch with the corrupted police! Update soon, please, Mila

    Author's Response:

    Truth is no one knows exactly how abused Harry was in canon, except the author. She kind of dances around the idea and doesn't give specifics, probably to make the books a little more appropriate for younger readers. It's hard to say, though.

    It was difficult to figure out how to make Albus have reason to send Severus without having obvious proof, so I played around with ideas a bit and this what I came up with. Glad you like it.

    Thank you for the lovely review.

Title: Chapter Two 28 Dec 2009 9:29 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please keep harry away from albus. I know sev is strong enough to succeed. Great chapter, post soon!

    Author's Response: Unfortuanately.....ah nevermind, you'll find out eventually. xD Thanks for R&R!
Title: Chapter Two 28 Dec 2009 8:06 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting story so far.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.

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