This was a good expository chapter. I really enjoyed it, though I worried for a second that a traitor would somehow rear it's horrible head. I hope they manage to get Harry away from Dumbledore. (I've always thought he was a little TOO manipulative)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'm hoping to get them away from Privet Drive next chapter, but no promises. Thanks for reviewing.
| Title: Chapter Four
| 17 Jan 2010 10:07 am
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| Reviewer: kazetoame (Anonymous)
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Ach, I'm tearing up. Can I kill Dumbledore? I like your portrayal of Severus in this and Harry's adorable. Waiting to see how the story develops. Keeping those chapters coming!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry to say but Severus, Arabella, and Sirius have first grabs. xD I'm really glad you are enjoying the story so far. Thank you for the review.
| Title: Chapter Four
| 17 Jan 2010 9:33 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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The sooner snape gets harry away from there the better I will feel. I hope sev and sirius join forces to get back at the dursleys and albus.
Author's Response: I haven't quite decided how much of a role Sirius will have yet, but he is certainly begging me to let him have a major one. We will see. :D Thanks for the review.
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