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Reviews For Finding Home
Can't wait to see what they do next. I'm assuming Harry's memory is of the same thing as Arabella's and also maybe the one right after Lily died. Author's Response: Don't worry, Albus will get his eventually. As to Harry's memories.....well, you'll find out soon enough. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Yes...he was rather naughty, wasn't he? I suppose we will have to punish him at some point. Thanks for the review!
I like this chapter much better! Author's Response: I'm glad that someone who read the original has finally told me how they feel. The original version not only felt out of place, but also didn't have the same depth as the others. I had to rewrite it. Thanks you so much for the review.
Author's Response: I'm working on it and hope to have it posted this weekend.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the review. That is the goal, but you know how muses are, so it's hard to say. :D
And bastard!Albus is one of my favourite. Author's Response: I like bastard!Albus too. Honestly, I never trusted him even in canon. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reviewing.
Harry is right, he will be safe with Severus, and yet I wonder why and how he recognizes Severus? Did Severus visit him back when he was still living with his parents? Or is there a deeper connection? Guess I'll have to wait and find out. I wish Severus would go and curse Vernon to hell. Sick *&^# . . .well you get the picture. Great job and please update soon! Author's Response: Yes, Dumbledore is quite nasty this time, and don't worry, Vernon will get his eventually. As to Harry knowing Severus, I will get into that (in part) in the next chapter. Thanks for the lovely review!
I also like how you've shown Arabella to have more backbone and not be just a mouthpiece for Albus, who is really a crazy old man for ignoring such signs. Hope Severus can help Harry and not scare him to death. Keep writing! Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. Arabella Figg has always been one of my favorite characters, though she is terribly underutilized. Thank you very much for the review.
And love that Figg is willing to help both Harry and Severus. I can't wait for more fabsx Author's Response: I'm really glad you are enjoying my story. Severus is quite lovely, isn't he? :D As to a plan, well, not quite, but he is wonderful at working on the fly and is always prepared for such.....eventualities. Arabella, despite being rather shy, has quite the backbone when she must and she loves little Harry. Thanks for the review.
I wondered how Albus would know about Vernon's intentions (and inclination) - first I guessed that the piece on info was in Arabella's letter, but how would she know? 'Intentions wards' were a surprising solution, very neat and original. It makes Albus even worse, though, as it implies he knew the real state of abuse. Bad, bad Albus. Your Harry is more abused than canon Harry, as it is common in fanfics (that is no criticism, simply an observation). I still wonder how Severus would know that there was no night buses in Surrey; it is an unimportant thing, though, hardly worth explaining. Nice touch with the corrupted police! Update soon, please, Mila Author's Response: Truth is no one knows exactly how abused Harry was in canon, except the author. She kind of dances around the idea and doesn't give specifics, probably to make the books a little more appropriate for younger readers. It's hard to say, though. It was difficult to figure out how to make Albus have reason to send Severus without having obvious proof, so I played around with ideas a bit and this what I came up with. Glad you like it. Thank you for the lovely review. |
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