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Reviews For You Can't Always Get What You Want
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank yous so much. I haven't abandoned this story, i Just lost heart after my computer crashed, taking my notes with it. I will get back to it soon.
Author's Response: I haven't given up, I'm just completly blocked right now. I hope to get back to this story soon. Thanks for the review. T
Author's Response: Thanks so much! T
I was particularly pleased with the development of Ron's character--in many of the Severus and Harry stories, Ron gets short shrift. I like your idea of him ending up a medic, and his marriage to Hannah Abbott. I sympathise more and more with Severus as he walks the ever more slender tightrope of being truly Dumbledore's Man, while keeping his cover, and protecting the children at Hogwarts as best he may while pretending to support the horribleness that the Deatheaters have brought there. Lucius and Narcissa's switch to the Order of the Phoenix is much more realistic and satisfying to read in your fic than it was in TDH. I particularly loved that little characterization bit about Lucius and Narcissa dancing and how he realized the first time they danced that he could love her. I'm so very glad that he did admit that love. I just hope that he gets to say it again when Voldy is finally dispatched. But in this fic-verse, I'm not exactly sure that he will survive even if he is able to save his family. This Wizarding War feels real. The horror and pain of it, the stolen moments of passion and pleasure, the fleeting instances where hope springs up, and the too many times when the darkness, blood and fire overcome things. I am very impressed by your writing. There were a couple of places where you had the word "site" where you should have more properly used "sight", and "rein" where you ought to have spelled it "reign", but your tale kept me enthralled when, normally, things like that would have thrown me out of the story. I look forward to the next chapter and all the chapter to come. I pray that you aren't afflicted with writer's block anymore. Well done! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I really am glad this story is being received well. My normal grammar beta is off-line. She's the one who usually catches my grammatical and other errors. Sorry if they pulled you out of the story.
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I hope that he can be with Millie some day again soon. How awful to lose his whole family too. I'm glad that some of the Slyterhins are seeing the Dark Lord for what he is. Great chappie Tambra. Yeah, stupid writer's block. I hate it, and it's become a familiar companion of late. Author's Response: Things are going to get a little hectic from here on out in the story. I have one or two more chapters to set up the rest of the war, and then... BANG! I'm sorry to hear about your WB. I commiserate with you completely. T |
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