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Title: Chapter 2: Tom Riddle's Locket I 22 Sep 2015 2:33 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    So the pairings have already changed. And Hermione didn't obliviate Harry. Lucius was certainly having second thoughts about his Death Eater status. Will he have the courage to change? Looking forward to finding out.

    Author's Response: Thanks again, and sorry for the long delay in my response.
Title: Chapter 2: Tom Riddle's Locket I 15 May 2010 12:56 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting chapter: the changes of scene between Ron/Hannah and Harry/Hermione are a nice touch and the whole chapter is well paced and provides many interesting insights. Great work

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.

    T

Title: Chapter 2: Tom Riddle's Locket I 02 Feb 2010 10:16 pm
Reviewer: Tonks-is-cool (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, I liked the different points of view, showing what the war means for people on both sides and those caught inbetween.

    Author's Response:

    I love to look at things from different perspectives.  I'm glad it wasn't distracting to you.

    Thanks for the review.

    T

Title: Chapter 2: Tom Riddle's Locket I 27 Jan 2010 12:23 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! You've shown us how real the war is, but kept it from being graphic. It's rather sad that they've cheated on one another, but there is a feeling that these new relationships are the better ones.

    And I like how you show Lucius as having some conscious and not being a complete monster.

    Author's Response:

    Well, the H/Hr thing was a request from someone and I have never written Harry with anyone but Ginny, so it is a challenge.

     I hate to portray any character as a complete monster.  Even Voldemort had his moments, though it is hard to reconcile him with any humanity he might posess.  Lucius has been an intriguing character to me since DH.  I like to portray him with a little more conscience than he normally shows.

     Thanks for the lovely reviews.

    T

Title: Chapter 2: Tom Riddle's Locket I 26 Jan 2010 5:41 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear, they all cheated on each other. How sad.


    Can this ever be repaired.

    Great chappie yet again Tambra.

    Author's Response:

    Everyone but Ginny.  Poor girl.  Things in this timeline will be much different.

     

    Thanks for the review.

     


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