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Title: Ch.. 4 Destination, Determination, Desperation 06 May 2016 3:40 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Lots of action in this chapter. So Lucius and the LeStrange brothers were sent on a suicide mission. Sounds like Bella doesn't feel any loss. Poor Severus does end up in the middle of these situations. Trying to help behind the scenes and trusted by none.

    Author's Response:

    I never imagined that Bella was particularly attached to anyone other than Voldemort.  She is the archetype of mindless sycophant.  Snape does always end up in the middle.  He can't help it, he has the same saving people thing that Harry does, only on a larger, much more self-destructive scale.  Thanks for your continued interest in this story.  I hope to update by Friday.  

Title: Ch.. 4 Destination, Determination, Desperation 15 May 2010 1:14 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

     T

Title: Ch.. 4 Destination, Determination, Desperation 04 Mar 2010 12:49 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, Tambra,

    I'm so sorry...I could have sworn I had reviewed this chapter, but apparently I didn't.

    Anyway, I really loved it, despite the gory battle scene. You write such tense, detailed scenes and the emotions are so real. I can feel the characters' desperation, fear, and melancholy at various times.

    I especially the insight into Severus' thoughts and how difficult this time truly is for him. Dumbledore certainly did him no favors, leaving him in such a mess. And he has done more than enough for the Malfoy family, yet as Narcissa said, he is the only one they can go to for help. I hope that it will pay off, in a good way, for them all before the end.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    No worries about the timing of the review.  I'm just glad you liked the chapter.

    Snape has never been in a good position.  He's always been the outcast, and the used person.  Things will be getting hairy for them all soon.  I hope you like what's coming.

    The battle scene was really needed to introduce the rebels.  We'll be seeing more of them soon. I never bought that the wizarding world just caved to Voldemort without a hitch.  There had to be more of a reistance than that lame radio show.

    Poor Narcissa.  I felt for her from HBP on.  She is just trying to keep her family alive.  That showed when she lied to Voldemort. You know she didn't do that without  alrady having this conversation with Lucius.  They may have acted too slowly, but the did finally act in cannon.

    Thanks for the review.

     T

Title: Ch.. 4 Destination, Determination, Desperation 11 Feb 2010 1:26 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter you are handling the AU so well with the canon

    Author's Response:

    Thanks.  I hope you keep reading.

    T

Title: Ch.. 4 Destination, Determination, Desperation 09 Feb 2010 4:09 pm
Reviewer: Wyrsa (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very unusual story, and well written one! It is intriguing,and I would love to know more of this alternative reality. What will this changes bring to all of them?
    Thank you for sharing it! Look forward for next chapters.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you're enjoying.;

    T

Title: Ch.. 4 Destination, Determination, Desperation 08 Feb 2010 9:38 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's amazing how much small changes effect how everything happens. I wonder if Severus will survive in the end this time around?

    I can't blame Severus for his reaction to Narcissa's proposition; she ought to have known better. In the end, I think that he would have helped them anyways, but I can understand his hesitation. He has already bent over backwards for their family far to much already.

    I hope that Poppy will be able to help Lucius and that his family will be able to escape this folly that they are caught up in. You know what they say about hindsight being ever perfect? Well, Lucius now knows that he should never have put his lot in with a madman.

    Personally, I'm glad that Harry was able to convince Hermione to not obliviate him. Her canon relationship with Ron never made sense to me and neither did Harry's with Ginny. Talk about mismatched couples!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for your review. 

    I'm glad you understood Snape's reaction to Narcissa.  It's unfortunate that she felt that bribing him with sex would get her the answer she wanted, but given the situation she finds herself in, it is understandable.  Narcissa will have to deal with the consequences of her actions later.

    I have to admit, I do have a soft spot for the Malfoys.  They are vile bigots who won't hesitate to do horrible things to get what they want, but they love each other.  I find that fascinating somehow, that dichotomy.

    I'm glad you're happy about the Harry/Hermione situation.  I really want to explore what that might mean later in their lives.

    Thanks again,

    T


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