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Title: Chapter 6 Lessons 15 May 2010 1:30 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    T

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons 20 Apr 2010 4:10 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, Tambra! I'm sorry I missed it when you first updated. I really loved everything here, the way that Severus has brought Harry and Hermione to Hogwarts to care for them and to help them on their quest. So long as they can stay under protective wards, Hogwarts might actually be the safest place for them. I mean, who would think to look for them there? And Hogwarts has so many great hiding places...the Room of Requirement, the Chamber, and any number of other places. I hope that Poppy will be able to give Severus some comfort and support; he desperately needs it right now. That last year must have so incredibly difficult for him. It really is a tribute to his courage and loyalty that he stayed the course and played his role to aid in Voldemort's defeat. I just hope he'll have a happier ending in your story than in canon. He deserves it.

    I love how Lucius and Narcissa are re-thinking their loyalties too, and hope that they can be redeemed too, and of course Draco.

    And though I like the canon pairings well enough, I do think you're doing a fantastic job showing developing relationships between Harry/Hermione and Ron/Hannah, and they are suited for one another in your world.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I didn't receive a notice for this so you either just posted it, and Im psychic, or my computer is mess up. I will go with A.

    I'm glad you enjoyed the chatper.  It's reviews like yours that make me want to write. I've been going through some horrendous writer's block, and now I feel inspired again.

    I am actually a Harry/Ginny shipper. I have been since she had a crush on him in the first book.  Ron and Hermione I can play around with, but Harry and Ginny will always be my first choice. That being said, the non-cannon HGHP ship was requested, and I am finding it fun to write.  Their relationship will go much slower than Ron's and Hannah's simply because they are cut off from the rest of the world.

    I couldn't imagine how difficult Snape's life was in the last year.  It broke my heart that he died thinking he would go to his grave unloved and unappreciated.  I had to give him at least Poppy.  She's the most logcal choice because she can help heal him after his meetings.

    I have a serious crush on Jason Isaacs therefore, I can't leave LUcius as an unredeemed jerk.  Narcissa, I can live with out. but that's only because she's not played by Jason Isaacs.  LOL.  I also hated that Draco was left unredeemed in cannon.  I hated that the years of discord between him and Harry was just left by the way side. There was no resolution there, and I can't imagine Harry , as stubborn as he is, would let Draco be after the war.  

    Thanks for the review. I'm  going to finish my bowl of strawberries and get right to work on the rest of the new chapter.

     

    T

     

     

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons 26 Mar 2010 12:29 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great loved Poppy and Severus wished you'd stay with them a bit more! Thank you for updating

    Author's Response:

    There will be more interaction between Poppy and Severus, but the story has to unfold along the other fronts too. 

     Thanks for your review.

     T

Title: Chapter 6 Lessons 23 Mar 2010 10:19 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sure that Poppy will keep the secret and start helping Severus behind the scenes. I hope that Lucius will do as Narcissa suggests and get his family out of the grasp of Voldemort. I wonder what will happen when both Ron and Hermione discover each others unfaithfulness? Will it destroy the friendship between them or will it simply allow them to realize that they were not really meant for each other?

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    thanks for the review.  I've always thought that Poppy and Snape have a special relationship, and I really wanted to give him an ally at the school who knows what's actually going on. 

     Lucius is a special case. I think even in cannon that he realised how wrong he had been about the whole Voldemort thing.  I don't know that he ever changed his views on Muggleborns, but I do believe he found that he had gone about the business of protecting his interests in the wrong way.

    You'll have to see about Ron and Hermione and of course, Ginny and Harry.

    T


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