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Reviews For Playing Pretend
I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh right!! I can find out right now, because you've posted "2" chappies. I love how you keep Draco and Harry in character. Draco is such a snob, but I have a feeling that he's going to be put in his place rather quickly with "this" Snape! I love it! I love the bickering between Harry and Draco too. It's too cute. Author's Response: Pandora, Yeah? Nice, glad to see that. Haha, yeah always a bonus. Thanks, I always try hard to keep everyone in character :P. Yes, Draco will not be indulging in "snobery" for long in this world. Heh, yeah it is although all the bickering is getting in the way of everything and they're not even noticing it. Thanks for the review! Updating very soon. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Fmh, Thanks. What exactly do you mean by "the boys are going to react as their characters to events" I do not entirely comprehend it. Thanks for the review though. -Mel :)
BUT Snape would figure out something was up by the time lunch was over... IMHO Author's Response: Fictionfan, Thanks. And yes, perhaps but you need to remember that this Snape is entirely an illusion..therefore he's not even real, not the actual Snape. All will make more sense in the end :P. -Mel :)
Author's Response: Dramagirl007, Thanks. And yes, I realize now I should probably explain that. It is because Harry got on the team a year before Draco and despite the fact that Draco received a more updated broom by selection, Harry was content with his. That and Snape probably wouldn't throw out a perfectly capable broom anyhow. So basically Draco wanted a recent one and Harry didn't care because he liked the one he had and was convinced he was still faster. He was also proving a point; it's the flyer not to broom that wins. :P. Does that explain things? Thanks and I will. Should update soon enough. -Mel :)
Author's Response: KKJ, Glad to hear it. Yes that's the plan, showing bits and pieces of what could be through the illusional place. Oh yes, there is plenty more to come! Thanks for the review, will be updating soon enough. -Mel :)
Great chapter! Author's Response: Silverstargirl, Yeah, they are hehe. True, their fighting isn't helping much at all! And perhaps that is a goal, but remember the name of it, it's the Room of Requirement so yeah. Thanks and glad to hear it, thank-you for the review! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Jan_AO, Thanks! Yes, Snape is no fool, he is sure to notice something is up with them. And with all their fighting? No, Snape isn't an idiot, especially if that's not how his sons normally act around each other. Glad you liked the descriptions, any particular reason why Harry's is your favourite of the two? Thanks, and thank-you for the review! -Mel :)
Author's Response: Missny1, Thanks, I'm thrilled to hear that. Yeah, this is only the first part where things aren't real but they're given a glimpse of what could be real. The other parts put them on track in their reality in which they try for a similar life. -Mel :) |
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