| Title: The Snitch Wars
| 26 Apr 2010 12:06 am
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| Reviewer: Salan Oran (Anonymous)
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A great story, I love it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters, for sure Snape will find the truth.
Go on with this great work
Salan
| Title: The Snitch Wars
| 24 Apr 2010 1:36 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the talk Severus is a hoot as a caring father! Can we have some back story to this world why are the boys with Snape
Great chapter. I like all of the misassumptions which are in place as they serve to reveal depth to each character and keep Snape guessing what is up with his sons. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
| Title: The Snitch Wars
| 20 Apr 2010 8:37 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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I love the fact thawt they have a famil.y here, I don't want them to go back to what they had, which was nothing. Great chapter.
| Title: The Snitch Wars
| 20 Apr 2010 5:12 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Lovely story! I hope you will update soon!
I love Dobby in this!!! It's just so sweet how he is just lapping it all up and being able to take care of Mr. Snape sir, Harry Potter!! Too cute.
I love this story, and can't wait for more.
Ah..Severus, you were so close! I know that this Severus isn't really the real one, but you would think that such an intelligent man wouldn't be easily fooled. These aren't 'his' boys and he is beginning to pick up on it, but has allowed himself to think that it is his fault for not giving them enough attention.
Both boys are finding parts of this world far more inviting than their own. I have a feeling that as time goes by, the forced companionship will begin to take a toll and they might (oh horror, of horrors) begin to like each other and become brothers of the heart in truth.
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