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Title: Touch a Snowflake 10 Nov 2016 4:22 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    You mark my words Severus Snape. That's going to come back and bite you on the ass.
Title: Touch a Snowflake 14 Jan 2013 9:35 pm
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg, Watercrystals! I love this story! Don't know how I never noticed it until now... I hope you're planning on continuing?
Title: Shifting Focus 05 Jul 2012 11:18 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    It's interesting so far. Sometimes you change back and forth between past and present tense though and it should stay one or the other.
Title: Touch a Snowflake 24 Feb 2012 5:15 am
Reviewer: Testa204 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very cute story...I like how Harry and Draco are shoved together to be friends... I also feel sad for Harry that none of it is "real" history for him.
Title: Touch a Snowflake 21 Dec 2011 10:00 pm
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed) [Report This]
    Totally wicked story...I just love how being in a family home & with a very different Severus Snape as there father is starting to have a profound effect upon both boys. It
    does appear as if both Harry & Draco have many similiarities in that neither of there childhoods were seriously wanting...neither of them were simply allowed to be a child. Neither of them were allowed to feel a sense of safety, care, protection or parental love that other children experience.
    Though I'm surprised that Severus
    hasn't made further attempts to question the boys both together or even separately? Also what affect will it have upon them if/and when
    they return to there "true home" where they weren't raised as brothers...will they still be able to friends, tolerate each other..and what about there relationship with Potions Master Severus Snape?
Title: Touch a Snowflake 29 Dec 2010 7:16 pm
Reviewer: Sirena (Signed) [Report This]
    Wait... it was Harrys birthdays not so long ago... and his birthday is in summer... How come it's snowing? Oo" I missed something I guess... They should be term starded before it could be snowing...

    It obvious Harry has no desire to go back, but how Draco feels?

    Author's Response:

    That's right, but this world isn't real at all, therefore none of the usual rules apply. Time, seasons, etc are all meaningless to this world.
    How Draco feels about it will be shown more soon, but you're right on about Harry. He'd give almost anything to stay.

    Thanks for the review!

    -Mel

Title: Shifting Focus 29 Dec 2010 4:36 pm
Reviewer: Sirena (Signed) [Report This]
    Hm... interesting idea {read along}
Title: A Slice of Honesty 10 Jul 2010 11:35 am
Reviewer: LucySnapeDaughter-Of-Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    its really good
    please update soon
    i think that they should have an outing somewhere
Title: A Slice of Honesty 03 Jul 2010 7:14 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely love this story! Please update soon! It would be hilarious if Snapes' real sons took the place of Harry and Draco as they take the sons' role in that world. It would be fun to read about what occurred when our Harry and Draco return and find out all the problems that occurred-especially regarding Snape! LOL! I can just imagine-no one else but Harry and Draco-knowing the truth, and find out they both have to serve the rest of term in detentions for putting Snape through the ringer about them "proclaiming to the world" they were his adopted boys! Oh and the Slytherins and Gryffindors acting at odds even more because the Golden Boy and Snake Prince are all buddy-buddy and allowing the other in to their territories! Oooh It would be awesome!
Title: A Slice of Honesty 11 Jun 2010 12:43 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Liked how you got them talking it was natural and easy and therefore belevable thank you

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