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Title: Only Half 20 May 2010 6:10 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oops! I'm sorry, I got the name of the other story that I love form you, mixed up with another author's !

    "Always a Snape" That's the other one that is my favourite from you. are you going to update that one soon?

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Yeah that's fine, hehe. I am going to update it soon, yes. I know it's been a while and have been trying to write it but I think because it's so short it seems to different to my other fics. I'm planning on making the chapters longer as a result. Should be updating quite soon, although no later than a week or so.

    -Mel :)

Title: Only Half 20 May 2010 1:52 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story! Although I'm loving seeing Harry and Draco get the father that they deserve, I'm so anxious for them to return to their other world, because I have a feeling that this is going to be really funny when they try to warm up the "other" Snape! I just can't wait to see the other Snape, if Harry and Draco were to call HIM Dad!

    You write such wonderful stories, and so many of them AND you update so quickly! I'm so impressed.

    I can't even update two stories very quickly.

    I think that this story, and "A Boy Who..." are my favourites, although I love ALL your stories.

    Great work!

    Author's Response:

    Pandora,

    Thanks! Thrilled to hear it, and I love your reviews. You're the first one I'm aware of that is actually looking forward to when they leave this semi-perfect world, which is a relief, hopefully not everyone will hate me when they do leave, lol. And yes, I have something funny/interesting etc planned for when they do return. I think you'll quite enjoy it, hehe. Although the point of this series is that first they are shown the world they could have then realize they want it and then strive to get it, hense the parts.

    You're impressed? Thanks! It's mostly because I can write so easily and quickly, I am actually working on more than I have uploaded. I only upload those I don't get stuck in. Once I get others more along, you'll see them up here too! Thanks!

    -Mel :)

Title: Only Half 20 May 2010 11:48 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Thats is sad for Draco Hopefully he will get it.
Title: Only Half 20 May 2010 11:07 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that Harry is going to have to spell it out to Draco. Severus and his boys shared a powerful bond of love and happiness and the portrait represents it. Severus and his children are real family and that's what this Draco isn't seeing. Severus felt like he had lost his family, because the Harry and Draco he was seeing over the last few days weren't the boys he knew and loved. It was breaking his heart. Now that he has noticed it, Harry is trying to rectify that wrong and he will need Draco's help to do so.

    Author's Response:

    silverstargirl,

    Yes, Draco is going to need a little help to see the full picture here. I like your description of their family and bond, it's right on, you're entirely correct! :) Thanks for the great review!

    -Mel :)

Title: The Snitch Wars 26 Apr 2010 12:06 am
Reviewer: Salan Oran (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A great story, I love it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters, for sure Snape will find the truth.

    Go on with this great work

    Salan
Title: The Snitch Wars 24 Apr 2010 1:36 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the talk Severus is a hoot as a caring father! Can we have some back story to this world why are the boys with Snape
Title: The Snitch Wars 21 Apr 2010 9:35 pm
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I like all of the misassumptions which are in place as they serve to reveal depth to each character and keep Snape guessing what is up with his sons. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Title: The Snitch Wars 20 Apr 2010 8:37 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the fact thawt they have a famil.y here, I don't want them to go back to what they had, which was nothing. Great chapter.
Title: The Snitch Wars 20 Apr 2010 5:12 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lovely story! I hope you will update soon!
Title: The Snitch Wars 20 Apr 2010 1:38 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Dobby in this!!! It's just so sweet how he is just lapping it all up and being able to take care of Mr. Snape sir, Harry Potter!! Too cute.

    I love this story, and can't wait for more.

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