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Title: The Snitch Wars 19 Apr 2010 9:54 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah..Severus, you were so close! I know that this Severus isn't really the real one, but you would think that such an intelligent man wouldn't be easily fooled. These aren't 'his' boys and he is beginning to pick up on it, but has allowed himself to think that it is his fault for not giving them enough attention.

    Both boys are finding parts of this world far more inviting than their own. I have a feeling that as time goes by, the forced companionship will begin to take a toll and they might (oh horror, of horrors) begin to like each other and become brothers of the heart in truth.
Title: Thirteen 04 Apr 2010 6:44 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder when Severus will figure out that these aren't HIS boys? And what will happen when he does? Any hoo, I'm glad that Harry enjoyed his birthday party and hope that Draco will get over his jealousy. Will Harry tell him that he's never had a party before?

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    silverstargirl,

    Well this Severus isn't real and is further unlikely to not figure it out entirely or else be further prevented from interveneing. Draco is unlikly to get over his jealousy anytime soon seeing as he's being reminded of more things Harry has that he doesn't and as a child who got any item he wished for, it really agitates him. As for the last question, maybe...maybe not? *shrugs*. Thanks for the review.

    -Mel :)

Title: False Peace 20 Mar 2010 10:49 am
Reviewer: ThriceRedeemed (Signed) [Report This]
    I am thoroughly intrigued. Update soon, I can't wait to see where you go with this!
Title: Hatred Runs Deep 07 Mar 2010 5:52 am
Reviewer: Celestialuna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter!
Title: Snape But...Different 07 Mar 2010 5:40 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter!
Title: Shifting Focus 07 Mar 2010 5:34 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome start of story!!
Title: False Peace 03 Mar 2010 11:08 pm
Reviewer: christy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG I like where the story is goin,I am just waiting for something to happen!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
Title: False Peace 02 Mar 2010 12:47 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow i really liked thelast two chapters. thanks for explaning the broom thing to me. im glad they fixed the garden. i wonder what snapes reaction will be when he finds out that harry and draco are not his harry and draco. keep up the good work and please update asap.
Title: False Peace 01 Mar 2010 10:39 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish we could have a little backdating on why Severus has adopted them in this world but I suppose we must be patient! Great chapter thank you I loved Dobby beating Harry at chess!
Title: False Peace 01 Mar 2010 2:32 pm
Reviewer: Hide the Seek (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really interesting, quite a unique way to bring Harry and Draco together. I enjoyed this immensely. Looking forward for the next chapter. ;)

    I hope everything will end well for them, especially Harry. It will be very hurtful and shocking if he is to be taken into real world after experiencing a better life.

    Thank you for the story. ;)

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