Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 01 Mar 2010 12:51 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved it that you made Draco as clumsy as Tonks. You gave a good start to my morning.

    Author's Response:

    Glad you liked it.  Draco is usually portrayed as a bad tempered Gary Stu.  I thought I would shake that image up a bit.

     Thanks for your review.

     T

Title: Chapter 1 01 Mar 2010 6:58 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Why do I get the feeling that the Hag Queen is as dangerous as she is beautiful? A most excellent first chapter. I look forward to reading more.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for the review.  I hope to have the second chapter up this week.

    T

Title: Chapter 1 01 Mar 2010 5:18 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, is Severus somehow caught with her wiles? Perhaps she's the queen because she's such a seductress and can hide her true form... I love how Harry and Draco are jealous though and Draco's clumsiness is truly hilarious. However, my favorite line was: “Just think, instead of Weasley red, you could be greasy git black,” Harry teased. “You have to admit, Ronald Snape does have a bit of a ring to it.” Now wouldn't that be one hilarious fic--Ronnikins finding out that he's really Snape's child. Lmao!

    Very nice start-I look forward to reading more!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks.  I was really trying to make this a one shot, but Hag-biology got in the way.  You'll have to see what happens with the Queen.

    I think Ron would be a suicide risk if he found out Snape was his dad.  Or maybe a homicide risk.  You can never tell with those Weasleys.  I'm glad you enjoyed that bit.

     T

     

Title: Chapter 1 01 Mar 2010 4:09 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!!! That was so good, and too funny Tambra! But then again, everything you touch is gold!

    I loved that Draco had taken after Tonks, and that he was clumsy, and this brought about a certain bond between Harry and Snape.

    Oh, and "Ronald Snape"? Too funny. Can you imagine Ron finding out that Snape is his father!!! LOL! He'd hit the roof.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much.  You reviewed on both sites and that is just extra special, especially since you make me blush with your comments. You really know how to give a great review.

     I"m glad you liked that Draco is a bit of a klutz, and the part about Ronald Snape.  That would be a nightmare for Ron.

    Thanks for the review(s)

    T


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