Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 24 Jan 2022 6:55 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    It was engaging, though unsurprisingly disturbing, to read this scene from Bellatrix’s perspective. I appreciated the thoughtful author’s note at the end on your interpretation of the Fidelius.
Title: Chapter 1 18 Mar 2010 9:10 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Rather a hard chapter and I skipped parts but interesting. Bella was always the strong one and its interesting that JK never showed her with her husband apart from the Dept of Mysteries I think he was there then. He obviously was weaker than her and perhaps Azkaban was harder for him. Sorry to go on good luck with your exams

    Author's Response:

    Hard chapter? I'm not sure what exactly you mean by that, but my apologies nonetheless. If you meant the torture scene, then I'll say that it looks like it'll be the only one in this story (but it's Bellatrix, so you never know). I'm glad you like my portrayal of the Lestrange marriage!

     

    Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 1 17 Mar 2010 9:07 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your Bella: she's exquisitely insane and that, combined with the touches of humanity, makes your portrayal of her actually rather sympathetic. This seems to be the start of something beautifully (albiet disturbingly) poignant.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm just relieved that you like my portrayal -- she's so hard to do right! I'm glad she's not a total turn-off of a narrator. (But you're right; it is highly disturbing, even -- or especially -- for me.)

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