Title: Chapter 1 - A Sip in the Park
| 10 Aug 2022 12:44 am
|
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
This is one of the best opening chapters that I’ve read. The clock at the beginning was brilliant, as was the humor threaded throughout. I’m back for another read through, as your stories are all magnificent.
Title: Chapter 1 - A Sip in the Park
| 12 Feb 2016 3:26 am
|
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Ahhh! I'm so excited about this new story, (new to me at least!) Thanks for sharing your talent of writing with us!
So your new story reminded me of this series, so I'm reading it again because I looooove it :D
wonderful chapter and beginig to your story! Ok, now on to chapter two! LOL
Title: Chapter 1 - A Sip in the Park
| 04 May 2010 10:18 pm
|
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Love this and like their interaction!
|