| Title: Chapter 4 - Liar, Liar
| 16 Apr 2010 2:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Marylou (Signed)
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Brilliant, just brilliant! Letting Snape in character is not a easy task, you managed it perfectly!
Great chapter, please update soon.
Marylou
I wonder what would happen if Harry asked to stay? I know that Severus would be surprised, shocked even, and would hopefully ask why. If Harry is safe enough in Severus' home for a weekend, surely they could find a way to make it more permanent. Wishful thinking never hurt anyone, right? :D
Great chapter!
| Title: Chapter 4 - Liar, Liar
| 16 Apr 2010 8:33 am
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| Reviewer: Susana (Anonymous)
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Really enjoying your story so far, thanks for writing & posting! I am excited to see how your version of Snape deals with the Dursleys, and how your version of Harry helps Snape with his task.
| Title: Chapter 4 - Liar, Liar
| 16 Apr 2010 7:15 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Harry must stay, please. Great chapter, love the conversatins between harry and sev.
Aww, poor Harry. He doesn't wanna go home. I know how that feels. I hope he gets to stay. :-(
I thought it was really cool how accepting Snape was of the tattoo. I didn't expect that, but I like how you're portraying him. :-)
Love your story!
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