| Title: Chapter 6 - Connections and Progress
| 12 Aug 2022 1:18 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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That was a profoundly touching moment when Snape took Harry onto his lap. Harry’s words were absolutely perfect. I love how they’re finding their way towards a father-son act that is becoming believably real.
| Title: Chapter 6 - Connections and Progress
| 16 Aug 2013 6:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Estella (Anonymous)
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I work at a nature center and apart of my job deals with stinging nettle. Actually if u touch nettle, pet it,and rub it in anyway the burning stinging sensation will not occur in order for it to occur you have to brush up against it king of fast.
I really like how the sensitivity is slowly evolving.
I love this story, I read it even before I got an account on here. It doesnt matter how many times I read it the part where Harry says My dads a death eater, he keeps me safe from the boogey man chokes me up everytime, this is definitly my favorite Series
Excellent chapter. I loved the way Harry and Snape managed to cobble together a father-son 'relationship' that actually started to feel real to them both. I liked the way you had Harry wonder who'd had the worst childhood: himself, Snape, or Tom Riddle. I appreciated the believable way Amy finally brought out her notebook and told the truth which had happened to her all those years ago. But my favorite, which choked me up, was sleepy Harry whispering, " 'My dad's a death eater,'... his head resting in the crook of Snape's neck. 'He keeps me safe from the boogey man.' " Powerful stuff. Thank you.
| Title: Chapter 6 - Connections and Progress
| 23 Apr 2010 5:47 pm
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| Reviewer: PascaleP. (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, the characterization in you story is very good!
Interesting story, really! Thank you for this fast and awesome update!
| Title: Chapter 6 - Connections and Progress
| 23 Apr 2010 6:19 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Loved it! And aw, Snape took Harry to the wax museum. How cute! lovely story and great chapter!
| Title: Chapter 6 - Connections and Progress
| 23 Apr 2010 5:20 am
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| Reviewer: Ehann (Anonymous)
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This is really good! I will look forward to next installment.
| Title: Chapter 6 - Connections and Progress
| 22 Apr 2010 11:02 pm
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| Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed)
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oh very nice I look forward to the next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 6 - Connections and Progress
| 22 Apr 2010 10:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, that was so sweet. I think that Snape is starting to really care for Harry. Harry sounds so small and sweet. I want to just hug him. Lol! I think that Snape does too|! :)
I'm really loving this story, and some of the lines were classic!!! Making Harry do lines, under the guise of practicing his cursive writing was just too Snape-like.
Poor Amy though; how awful to be tortured like that as a child--so traumatic.
I just can't wait for more of this wonderful, exicitng story.
There are only a couple of stories that I like Harry de-aged--most I don't care for, but yours is definitely one I'm enjoying very much!!! :)
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