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Reviews For The Definition of Home
So cute little scenes, like Snape lifting Harry on his lap. Poor Amy! Must have been horrible for this little girl in the cave!
I wonder what Severus is going to do about what he heard during Harry's nightmare? Will he confront Harry and attempt to get him to talk openly about his childhood?
I really enjoyed that bit about Harry's dad keeping him safe from the boogey man, and Snape having the automatic reflex to card his fingers through Harry's hair. I can also see the bit of Russian lineage (the pale skin and sharp features are more typical of Russians than the English) Author's Response: Sorry 'bout that. Compared to some of the other 'tortures' one can find in other stories, I thought it wouldn't be too bad. Something a demented ten year old would think was a power trip.
And thanks :)
Snape comforting Harry after his nightmare was such a good scene and I enjoyed the interaction between them the next morning as Snape asked about the nightmare. And then letting him sleep on his lap in the afternoon was just precious. It's all so lovely, I don't want it to end. You seem to have a great grasp on Amsterdam and traveling and such, which is really nice. It adds a special touch to the story. Well, I could go on and on, but I've probably said enough for now. Such a great chapter! I'm looking forward to the next part already. ;-) Author's Response: Thanks! I'm an expat and just left Amsterdam after a few years of living there. All the places that I've mentioned (with the exception of a few upcoming wizarding ones) definitely exist - the Athenaeum Boekhandel is one of my favourite bookstores and you can see the giant chess board from google maps if you zoom in enough on Max Euweplein at the top corner. It's a great city to explore. :) And don't worry, the story is not even close to being over. ;)
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