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Title: Chapter 7 - A Toast and Toss of Coin 12 Aug 2022 8:44 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a riveting chapter! My horror kept growing from Harry’s one step to the next. Excellently done. I imagine that Harry is looking forward to Snape’s reaction with a fair bit of anxiety.
Title: Chapter 7 - A Toast and Toss of Coin 30 Oct 2012 8:31 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    ...of course, I just realised the Harry may have put himself into one of those life threatening situations yet again. Snape sure sounds pissed, Harry!!
Title: Chapter 7 - A Toast and Toss of Coin 30 Oct 2012 8:26 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    I perfectly understand Harry's need to strike out on his own and try new things. Lets face it, he's either locked up tight or in a near death situation - I think he just needs some in-between times.
Title: Chapter 7 - A Toast and Toss of Coin 14 Oct 2012 1:45 pm
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Loooool, this chapter always makes me laugh when I read it!
Title: Chapter 7 - A Toast and Toss of Coin 26 Apr 2010 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    I feel remiss that I haven't reviewed this story yet, but I'd like to (finally) let the author know that I'm really enjoying this a lot. I love the realism-- the character interactions are very human (rather than melodramatic). It was a fun plot in England: drunk Boy Hero dragged out of tree and treated to loud hangover morning-- what's not to love? Now the Red Light district! Really, how could a 15 year old resist? I'm sure that Snape will be through the roof because of the terrible security risk, but finding Harry sober and buying a magazine is quite tame. Harry should have known that he couldn't trick the wards, surely they would be designed so that someone couldn't hustle him out of the room.
Title: Chapter 7 - A Toast and Toss of Coin 25 Apr 2010 1:06 pm
Reviewer: love_it (Signed) [Report This]
    hahaha Harry can sometimes act so stupid! What in the world possessed him to leave the hotel and go to a sex shop? Did he not think that Snape is clever enough to put a tracking spell on him (or maybe the watch?)...
    Even through the idea is idiotic beyond words, I guess I have to remember that Harry is a typical horny teenage boy, even if he's the Boy Who Lived.
    I'm curious as to how Snape will punish him. Hopefully he'll get creative...
    Anyways, I really enjoyed this chapter, especially their conversation at the cafe and Snape's hint about Lily. I also like that you slipped in a variant definition of home. Very clever.
Title: Chapter 7 - A Toast and Toss of Coin 25 Apr 2010 11:16 am
Reviewer: manon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! Little Harry-Elliot is so sweet and Snape is very snapish ;-D

    Great chapter, but Harry is in big trouble. Snape'll be not to pleased with him and I'm afraid Harry'll be not to pleased either , after their 'talk'! LOL!

    Please update soon, nearly can't wait for more (as always!)

    Thank you very much for this brilliant story.
Title: Chapter 7 - A Toast and Toss of Coin 25 Apr 2010 8:40 am
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay! Big breath... I finally have internet, so I can finally tell you how much I'm enjoying your story. I've been forcing my friend to check every second day for updates and she was getting pretty annoyed ^_^.

    I think what I really like is the way you've portrayed Harry. His state at fifteen is that kind of disorganised defiance that teen kids get up to generally harmless, but certainly pushing the boundaries. It's a risk taking stage of development so I think Harry trying to escape control and experiment with drugs and sexuality is to be expected, and summer is the perfect time for him to rebel. I think you've contrasted this stage interestingly with Harry's younger self, his uncertainty and introvertedness coming to the fore and really indicating the reasons for his older personality. I loved the my dad's death eater and the bogeymen has red eyes, nicely crafted.

    Snape is also very interesting, I like the more relaxed Snape you've presented us. He understands Harry's rebellion, because he lived it in his own way maybe, and probably knows how silly it is. I'm interested to see more of Snape's relationship with Dumbledore as well as Harry.

    I think your settings are written well too, I really got a feeling for the bustling high street shopping of Stockport and Amsterdam has been nothing but a delight to read.

    Personally, I feel your approach to swearing, drugs, sex and alcohol are all fine. Even if an individual doesn't personally they certainly couldn't accuse you of glorification of endorsement. Not to mention the position of drugs in society is not internationally equal, and is still open to debate. As for swearing in fic I'm never bothered by either its presence nor its absence as long and the author doesn't do this : F$@* which is assault on the eyes ^__^. Commit or commit not to I say.

    So excited to see the next part, I wish I could've held off reading this part so that wait would feel shorter.
Title: Chapter 7 - A Toast and Toss of Coin 25 Apr 2010 12:48 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Harry!!! (Eyes him with a stern look) What HAVE you gotten yourself into THIS time.

    I love your Harry. He's so mischevious and funny and sweet, and just a typical teenage boy, who can't stay out of trouble

    And Snape. You keep him so Snape-like. All stern and forbidding, but deep down he's staring to care about Harry's welfare.

    I think that Harry really needs someone like Snape to keep him in line, and keep him safe. The boy is a trouble magnet! And reckless and just really needs someone to protect him and make him feel safe and cared for, while giving him boundaries and firm guidance. If Snape can give Harry that firm hand that he needs, without resorting to insulting and demeaning him, he'd be just the sort of father-figure that Harry needs.

    Great story!! I'm so anxious to see if Snape turns Harry into potions ingrediants, for this latest stunt!! Too cute.
Title: Chapter 7 - A Toast and Toss of Coin 24 Apr 2010 10:38 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy is Harry in trouble, but I wonder if Snape will deage him again because he's easier to control? hope you can update again soon I love this story.

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