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Title: Chapter 8 - The Value of A Boy 27 Apr 2010 11:01 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's sad, but good, that Harry is beginning to see that Sirius was never going to be the kind of parental figure that he needs. Sirius didn't take life seriously enough to be able to protect Harry adequately. Harry needs someone like Severus to take care of him. I hope that this mission will continue to bring them closer to each other.

    Great chapter!
Title: Chapter 8 - The Value of A Boy 27 Apr 2010 10:48 am
Reviewer: manon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey, excellent, but somehow sad chapter!

    Harry certainly deserved those few swats and I think he starts realizing, that Snape cares about him.

    I love the interaction between Harry and Snape and I just love this story!
Title: Chapter 8 - The Value of A Boy 27 Apr 2010 8:51 am
Reviewer: love_it (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter! I truly love how this story is progressing. I could attempt to ramble on about all the parts I adored, but then I would just be copying and pasting the entire chapter in my review...
    Thank you for such a marvelous chapter. Please update soon!
Title: Chapter 8 - The Value of A Boy 27 Apr 2010 8:22 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    You make me wanna cry. I think I was a melted puddle by the end of the chapter.

    Before I dive in, I just want to say that I LOVE the chapter title. I don't know where it came from, but it made me say "Awwww" even before I opened the chapter. Maybe I'm just a sap. ;-)

    I loved the new definition of home that Snape gave Harry at the end there. I think my heart broke when Harry had his realization that he couldn't remember Sirius' voice. That is one of the most awful feelings and my heart hurt for him right then.

    I'm so glad Snape was there to take care of him. I just love how he seems to understand Harry, without him actually having to say much at all. Snape gets him and I like that. Your Snape is, I think, my favorite fanfiction Snape I've ever read. That and AYLNO Snape. Yours is just so unique and different, I could go on and on about him so I'd better stop here. ;-)

    The way Snape was sitting down and holding Harry in front of him while he lectured him was an excellent visual. I dunno why, but I really thought that was very clever. I could just feel Harry's shame as he stood there.

    And this is just a little thing, but I truly loved the way Snape subtly helped Harry to get ready for bed. The simple things, like warming his bed, cleaning his face, taking his glasses, and dimming the light. And when he moved Harry's shoes and hung up the jacket, I was just thinking, "Ah, that's very nice." It was just a very family-ish, homey kind of scene and while small, it added a nice touch, I thought. I liked it a lot.

    Anyhow, I have rambled on quite enough and yet I'm sure I'm leaving stuff out I had originally intended to say, but oh well. Just know I am truly enjoying this story. I look forward to your updates very much.

    Thanks for sharing! :D
Title: Chapter 8 - The Value of A Boy 27 Apr 2010 8:07 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was a great chapter...snape is really showing he cares for harry, from the caring, correction and then to the tenderness and understanding. It is all part of being a parent. Amazing.
Title: Chapter 8 - The Value of A Boy 27 Apr 2010 8:03 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    I seriously just love this story. It makes my days. Thanks. :D

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