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Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 14 Aug 2022 12:22 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was hilarious and so fun to read! Thanks for the entertaining chapter.
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 29 Aug 2018 1:59 pm
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    I have re-read this story, often, and you are talented, from root to crown.
    It is pleasing, gentle and you know how to craft the feeling of relationship.
    You may laugh at me, a lot, but I have found the river Mersey, the restaurant, Lily's road, St.Mary Way, a park in Stockport, but not the small alley, on which you placed Snape's house,'Spinner's End- so what is the alley's road name?I hope it exists.
    I would like to use Google earth to walk down it....
    Would you give me a clue? *a hand tugging hair*
    After 14. January 2016, your story gives a quiet balm.
    He is missed.
    Please write on from time to time.
    Best regards.

    Author's Response: I didn't use an exact address, but had in mind the park by Bridge Hall Primary and the neighbourhood south of there for Lily, and the neighbourhood directly north with the city/country names as Snapes. Hope that helps. :)
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 30 Oct 2012 9:50 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahaha! what a perfect ending to Harry's birthday celebrations.
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 24 Jul 2010 7:57 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    "Just when he thought Snape was actually being nice and human"... ^^ I concur! Friends and relatives getting the waitstaff to sing for you on your birthday is evil! that's why I choose a Chinese restaurant for my birthday - they don't do the singing thing there! LOL

    Great chapter.
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 17 Jul 2010 8:41 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    You just keep getting better and better, don't you! I love to keep reading and loving what you're writing. Very nicely done.
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 02 May 2010 9:35 am
Reviewer: stella008 (Signed) [Report This]
    i reallylove this story. it's seriously the highlight of my day. I've been stalking my own email every second day at the same time just to read your chapters. I love how you are just able to not manipulate any of the characters but yet it's not like JK Rowling's story anymore, it's yours. :)
    Are you a phsyciatrist? It seems like you are really good at evaluating minds. Sirius was always my favorite character, and I hate how most authors overlook him, but i honestly think you've got the true interperation of him. Thank you for these amazing updates. They are fast and full of great stuff.
    Btw, do you have your chapters pre-written or do you write them the day of?
    I'll be waiting to read the next part tomorrow. Great job :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review! :)

     I'm not a psychiatrist, actually, I'm not even a parent. I think when I become one I'll probably be a very strict one, hee. Thanks for the note on Sirius, I think he's much better suited as a big brother to Harry than a father figure.  As for the chapters, I have the whole story planned out, and I write the scenes a bit out of order. Then I string them all together. :)

Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 02 May 2010 5:19 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that Severus has definitely accepted that Harry is in his home to stay. He has, all unknowingly, become Harry's parent. I hope that nothing will happen to shatter the fragile peace their household has.

    Poor Harry! I understand perfectly his horror at Severus' sudden insistence on seeing to his sexual education. It's his own fault, of course, and I've a feeling that he will be far more careful in the future; if only to spare himself further humiliation and embarrassment. xD
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 02 May 2010 1:36 am
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *giggles* I like that. This was cute! I'm glad that Harry didn't have any nightmares though. I'm happy for him. And I love how Harry called him dad...and then called the house theirs...and then Snape thinking of the room as Harry's room...it was cute! Thank you! Give me more soon please?
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 01 May 2010 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    That first part was very amusing! Haha, I have this feeling that Snape talking about sex is something that many people don't want to hear. ;-)

    I love that Harry called Snape "Dad" and, if I'm correct, neither one of them even noticed. I'd wager that they didn't pick up on it after their days in Amsterdam. Harry was quite used to calling him that and Snape was used to hearing it. And then there was the distraction of the Malfoys.

    I love your portrayal of Snape's house. I'm writing a story and your version of Snape's house reminds me a lot of mine. I like it. I'm glad Harry likes it too and that he defended it. It's small, but very homey. :D

    I'm very curious about T.S. Eliot. It would seem that Snape admires the man quite a bit, for he's named his "son" Elliot and Harry overheard him quoting "The Hollow Men" a few chapters back. I've always thought Snape would be a well read man so this excites me. Can't wait to see where you take it. :D

    I love the relationship developing between Harry and Snape. You're doing such a great job with it.
Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs 01 May 2010 11:22 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant. I love how Snape and Harry have settled naturally into a real relationship which feels very true to life. Snape is great: sarcastic, strict, but very human and Harry's embarrassment at the prospect of having to discuss sex with him was hilarious.

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