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Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me 05 May 2010 5:03 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    HAHAHAHA!! That first scene had me cracking up! I loved how Harry was talking backwards and Snape was just taking it easy on the couch.

    Poor Harry, getting bee stung, and allergic on top of that. I'm glad Snape was there to take care of them. I don't know why, but I like the idea of Snape in muggle clothes. Makes him seem more human. And Harry became Elliot twice again. Hmm, interesting...

    I love how at home Harry is at Spinner's End, walking around barefoot and just generally being a normal kid at home. It's refreshing. I can see why he would want to stay.

    I thought Dumbledore borrowing Harry was amusing and Snape waiting up for him was so endearing. Just don't tell him I said that. ;-)

    Great job, as usual. As always, I am already looking forward to your next chapter! I'm so glad you're posting here! :D
Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me 05 May 2010 4:40 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!!! Love it.
Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me 05 May 2010 4:13 am
Reviewer: orgwoman (Signed) [Report This]
    As usual, I love it! Can't wait to throw Voldemort into the beehive. LOL! It's like throwing water on the wicked witch of the west.

    Your story is very compelling. It just sucks me in and won't let go. I love the characters, the dialogue, the setting -- everything! Great job.
Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me 05 May 2010 3:12 am
Reviewer: love_it (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter is so great! I could totally see the conversation with Bishop, and Harry's manipulating of the dark mark was particularly ingenious. Your description of the entire bar scene was cinematic and original.
    Severus' retribution for Lucius' taunting was humorous, as well as Harry's boyish admiration for Severus' upper body strength.
    Vernon is disgusting, especially with that calamite comment (by the way, Harry wasn't the only one who had to look it up!)
    The bee allergy and curfew worry was a nice touch and very enjoyable to read. Thanks for updating!
Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me 05 May 2010 2:15 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! I was so so scared for Harry. I'm glad that he was okay.

    Oh and that little scene in the bar was hilarious. "Harry the Thud"! Too funny.

    Love this story.

    Molly seems to be approving of Severus taking Harry, doesn't she?

    Can't wait for the next chappie.
Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me 05 May 2010 1:24 am
Reviewer: Wrinkled_Fabric (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a wonderful chapter, I love the little details throughout the chapter that continually and subtly show the affection the boys are beginning to feel for each other. Very realistic and very touching.

    And I loved Severus' reaction to Dumbledore 'borrowing' Harry. His tune has definitely changed since the beginning of summer ^^ Molly was brilliant, I always do love her and you've written her very well - not too mushy like a lot of authors do.

    Punk!Harry was kinda funny to imagine, and what Severus did to Malfoy - that was brilliant, utterly brilliant.

    Will be awaiting the next update ^^
    Fabsx
Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me 05 May 2010 12:06 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Send cluster of bees on Voldemort! =D
    Very nice chapter =o)
Title: Chapter 10 - You'll be the Death of Me 04 May 2010 10:56 pm
Reviewer: jflame (Signed) [Report This]
    Shudder!! Bees.....horrid little stingy things!!
    Loving this story.

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