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Reviews For The Definition of Home
Poor Harry, getting bee stung, and allergic on top of that. I'm glad Snape was there to take care of them. I don't know why, but I like the idea of Snape in muggle clothes. Makes him seem more human. And Harry became Elliot twice again. Hmm, interesting... I love how at home Harry is at Spinner's End, walking around barefoot and just generally being a normal kid at home. It's refreshing. I can see why he would want to stay. I thought Dumbledore borrowing Harry was amusing and Snape waiting up for him was so endearing. Just don't tell him I said that. ;-) Great job, as usual. As always, I am already looking forward to your next chapter! I'm so glad you're posting here! :D
Your story is very compelling. It just sucks me in and won't let go. I love the characters, the dialogue, the setting -- everything! Great job.
Severus' retribution for Lucius' taunting was humorous, as well as Harry's boyish admiration for Severus' upper body strength. Vernon is disgusting, especially with that calamite comment (by the way, Harry wasn't the only one who had to look it up!) The bee allergy and curfew worry was a nice touch and very enjoyable to read. Thanks for updating!
Oh and that little scene in the bar was hilarious. "Harry the Thud"! Too funny. Love this story. Molly seems to be approving of Severus taking Harry, doesn't she? Can't wait for the next chappie.
And I loved Severus' reaction to Dumbledore 'borrowing' Harry. His tune has definitely changed since the beginning of summer ^^ Molly was brilliant, I always do love her and you've written her very well - not too mushy like a lot of authors do. Punk!Harry was kinda funny to imagine, and what Severus did to Malfoy - that was brilliant, utterly brilliant. Will be awaiting the next update ^^ Fabsx
Very nice chapter =o)
Loving this story. |
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