| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 14 Aug 2022 12:52 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This was a lovely chapter. The discussion about adoption was so well navigated, and the way that Snape acted towards Harry on the boat ride was absolutely heart melting. Thanks for such an emotionally fulfilling chapter.
That simple trust? Lovely.
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 26 May 2010 12:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Nicole (Anonymous)
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I am enjoying your story so much! I have been reading it for hours. :) I will leave two chapters for tomorow, it is almost 6 am here lol!
I realized I never reviewed the last chapter. Oops. So I wouldn't let myself read the next till I actually reviewed. ;-)
Loved this one, as usual. I thought it was cool how Snape mentioned that Harry had called him "Dad" before. Snape notices. :D
The banter between them on the boat ride was cute and amusing. I like how comfortable they are with each other.
Great chapter! :D
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 13 May 2010 3:45 am
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| Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed)
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Oh I love snape being all daddyish! Sweat i love this !
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 12 May 2010 7:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Quynce (Signed)
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My goodness, is there anything cuter than seasick child!Harry and a comforting Snape? No, I don't think so. I hope there's more adoption discussion and more analysis of Harry's friends (I'm sure his 15 year old self has more critical thinking skills).
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 11:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I do love how you write Eliot and Severus thay are definately on of my favourite pairings thank you
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 5:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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*sighs* happily. Lovely chapter as always dear. I'm so glad to have read it. Please update soon!
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 5:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous)
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Well, I have read this chapter thrice already and this is the second review that I am posting on this chapter even though I completely disagree with Snape's characterization ( very OOC for me) - that's how good u write ... can't get enough sort of. Love Snape-kid Harry.
I know that Severus told Harry to think about it for a week, but I have a feeling that both of their minds are already made up. Despite themselves, they have become a family.
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