Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 4:29 am
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Reviewer: orgwoman (Signed)
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Awww, so sweet! I love this interaction between Snape and Harry. Usually I don't like Snape getting too sappy, but you keep him in character enough that it's a believable bonding between the two. Once again, lots happening in this chapter that keeps the story moving at a good pace while still developing the main characters. Great job!
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 2:25 am
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Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous)
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Wel, I dont know about other women on the boat but I'm totally ready to go home with Snape :) Loved it as always. Do you know that I actually read this story backward - as in starting from the last chapter to the first. It's great - the story, I mean, not backward reading.
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 2:08 am
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Reviewer: love_it (Signed)
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You are a great writer! You blend humor, drama, and action seamlessly. I really enjoy reading this story, and am so glad whenever you update! The entire chapter was flawless, and the character development is well-wrought. I can't even begin pointing out the bits that I liked, because then I would be simply reiterating the whole chapter to you! haha... Keep up the great work!
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 1:59 am
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Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Anonymous)
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I like little Harry especially... he's just too cute! Love this story and hope your schedule will ease up a little and let you keep going with this story.
its really good please update soon
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 10 May 2010 11:04 pm
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Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Squeeee!
Snape is becoming "Harrified!" Hee hee!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
I'm so excited to see that Snape is starting to really care about Harry, and I love how he comforts Harry when he's sea-sick.
I can't wait for Snape to adopt Harry. I think that it's exactly what Harry needs in his life, and I think that taking care of Harry is good for Snape too.
I'm so anxious for the next chapter.
great story so far please update soon
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 10 May 2010 9:58 pm
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Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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So Snape can adopt Harry? Super! They are so cute together! =O)
aww that was cute. I like how Snape is being such a dad, even if he THINKS he's acting...though I'm sure he really felt the way he acted at Harry's/Elliot's seasickness. Poor little fella.
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 10 May 2010 7:14 pm
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Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed)
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slendid decriptions-loving Snape's humor
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