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Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer 11 May 2010 4:29 am
Reviewer: orgwoman (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, so sweet! I love this interaction between Snape and Harry. Usually I don't like Snape getting too sappy, but you keep him in character enough that it's a believable bonding between the two. Once again, lots happening in this chapter that keeps the story moving at a good pace while still developing the main characters. Great job!
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer 11 May 2010 2:25 am
Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wel, I dont know about other women on the boat but I'm totally ready to go home with Snape :)
    Loved it as always.
    Do you know that I actually read this story backward - as in starting from the last chapter to the first.
    It's great - the story, I mean, not backward reading.
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer 11 May 2010 2:08 am
Reviewer: love_it (Signed) [Report This]
    You are a great writer! You blend humor, drama, and action seamlessly. I really enjoy reading this story, and am so glad whenever you update! The entire chapter was flawless, and the character development is well-wrought. I can't even begin pointing out the bits that I liked, because then I would be simply reiterating the whole chapter to you! haha... Keep up the great work!
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer 11 May 2010 1:59 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like little Harry especially... he's just too cute! Love this story and hope your schedule will ease up a little and let you keep going with this story.
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer 10 May 2010 11:49 pm
Reviewer: LucySnapeDaughter-Of-Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    its really good
    please update soon
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer 10 May 2010 11:04 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Squeeee!

    Snape is becoming "Harrified!" Hee hee!

    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!

    I'm so excited to see that Snape is starting to really care about Harry, and I love how he comforts Harry when he's sea-sick.

    I can't wait for Snape to adopt Harry. I think that it's exactly what Harry needs in his life, and I think that taking care of Harry is good for Snape too.

    I'm so anxious for the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer 10 May 2010 10:19 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    great story so far please update soon
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer 10 May 2010 9:58 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So Snape can adopt Harry? Super! They are so cute together! =O)
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer 10 May 2010 8:54 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    aww that was cute. I like how Snape is being such a dad, even if he THINKS he's acting...though I'm sure he really felt the way he acted at Harry's/Elliot's seasickness. Poor little fella.
Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer 10 May 2010 7:14 pm
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    slendid decriptions-loving Snape's humor

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