Wonderful wonderful wonderful.
And that's all I have to say about that.
This story makes me happy every time I read it :D
This is good and I like it. Peace! CheyRain
This is good and I like it. Peace! CheyRain
This is good and I like it. Peace! CheyRain
This is good and I like it. Peace! CheyRain
This is good and I like it. Peace! CheyRain
This is good and I like it. Peace! CheyRain
This is good and I like it. Peace! CheyRain
Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 18 Jun 2011 11:45 pm
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Reviewer: bricktastic (Anonymous)
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Awesome story, read it in one go. I usually go for angst and unresolved conflict and all that, but your story was just the right mixture of comedy and (a little) drama with bits of adventure thrown in. Loved your dialogue, by the way. The constant banter between Snape and Harry felt very in-character, strangely enough. Really liked the Amsterdam part too. It was fun to watch these two characters thrown into a completely different environment and still act like themselves. (Actually, the little-Elliot-is-so-cute and Snape-is-softening-up part was why I loved the Amsterdam scenes so much, lol.)
I imagine the sequel might be a little more intense, what with fighting Voldemort and everything, and I'm really looking forward to reading it.
Thanks for sharing your amazing stories!
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