| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 01 Jul 2010 3:20 am
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| Reviewer: Jessie (Anonymous)
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I really enjoyed your story. It took me a little while to get into it but once I did I was hooked.
I like how Sev is still snarky, but you can tell that he cares for Harry/Elliot.
I have to go read the sequel now :D
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 28 Jun 2010 7:49 am
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| Reviewer: BreakANew (Signed)
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=] great job, the story was very touching. You're an excellent writer :D
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 03 Jun 2010 10:00 pm
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| Reviewer: octopus (Anonymous)
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Love. Especially the characterisations. Whereas with some stories it's a bit kindof woah, okay, that's Snape and Harry? I could really see this happening, somehow.
Sequel plz!
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 26 May 2010 9:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely ending thank you for a great story
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 25 May 2010 1:21 am
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| Reviewer: love_it (Signed)
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I can't wait to start on the sequel!
That was a great ending to a great story. I really love how you characterized everyone, and Harry's room sounded very cool. (I am totally loving the wallpaper)
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 25 May 2010 12:10 am
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| Reviewer: orgwoman (Signed)
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"I'll always be little idiot to you." Great line! :)
I'm sorry to see this part end but am very excited that you are continuing into the school year. I like how you've changed things up a bit but still allowed for canon events to transpire by having Snape give Harry the HBP's book. Nice!
Overall, great story. I really enjoyed the ride. Looking forward to how Snape and Harry deal with having to pretend to hate one another at school.
(" j9;l3;l0;l6;m0; was highlighted in the centre, and Snape wondered for a moment how Harry had figured out the translation of Elliot until he remembered that there were some Russian translations amongst his collection of T.S. Elliot works. ")
What was the Beginning of the sentence supposed to be?
Author's Response: So, apparently the cyrillic alphabet does not work here. Hee. I've fixed it, thanks for the note!
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 24 May 2010 7:45 pm
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| Reviewer: nikka (Anonymous)
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Hi, I love this story! it is really wonderfull and I am looking forward to another chapter, hpe it will be soon... :D
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 24 May 2010 6:43 pm
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| Reviewer: LLALVA (Anonymous)
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I love it. The way that Harry becomes Elliot. And the six year old! Snape and Harry are so good to each other. I would say hurry up with the sequel!
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 24 May 2010 5:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Jaylen (Anonymous)
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I loved this story and can't wait for more. Your interpretation of the characters is witty and full of depth, making for an interesting read. I do have a question though, what is the translation of Elliot on the wooden plaque? I didn't understand what that was? A type of russian translation?? Could you please explain. Thanks for sharing such a good story.
Author's Response: Yeah, it was Elliot written in the cyrillic alphabet, which apparently does not work here. Whoops. :)
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