I really like the way you're weaving in the alternative version of events for book 6. I can't believe this part is finished. I'm greatly looking forward to the next part. I hope they'll take some travels in the future I think you have an absolute gift for describing a setting. Thanks for the great read.
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 24 May 2010 9:10 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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What a way to end, Elliot Snape is now Sevs son. Great chapter. Can't wait to read more about this family.
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 24 May 2010 9:00 am
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| Reviewer: Shader (Anonymous)
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This was a great story. I've enjoyed every chapter and would love to read more. At the very least I'd like to see a Severus and Elliot post-war one shot.
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 24 May 2010 7:10 am
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| Reviewer: txn (Signed)
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Loved this. I hope you're planning a sequel.
Great story.
Back to school, that aught to be interesting.
Love the ending 'bloody cockroach' haha.
That was a nice wrap up to the summer. I'm glad Harry got adopted and I thought the way he decorated his room was very cool. You can tell he's really begun to take pride in his new father and feels quite at home. :-)
I think the name thing is cool, how Snape will occasionally call Harry "Elliot" instead. That's sweet. Harry mentally renaming the coffee to "Dad's bag of coffee" was a nice touch also.
This was a very good story. I'm sorry to see it end, but am excited that you plan on continuing this universe with a sequel. I can't wait!
I guess it turned out to be quite a good thing that Harry ended up drunk in Stockport this summer, didn't it? ;-)
An excellent way for this first part to end. I agree with Elliot's assessment that he isn't really a Potter. He has no real memories of his birth family and one could hardly call him a Dursley (a curse on any who would dare). He will be far happier as Elliot Snape.
I wonder if he will tell Hermione and Ron about the adoption or will he keep it a secret even from his closest friends? I suppose I will find out in the sequel, for which I am waiting breathlessly.
Great story!
Are you REALLY changing his name to Elliot?! As much as I love this story, that might be the thing that turns me away. Harry, in my mind, will always stay Harry.
But other than that, good chapter!
Author's Response: Not...really. He is staying Harry Potter in the wizarding world, it'll just be the name Snape uses once in a while. If that makes sense. :)
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 24 May 2010 3:57 am
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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I loved this story so much! The last chapter was great and I'm looking forward to the sequel. :)
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 24 May 2010 3:42 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh, wow! The end already? Aw:(
Will you write a sequel Oliver?
Oh, I didn't realise that they were changing Harry's "first" name too.
Aw, Harry finally has a place to call "home" and someone permanent in his life.
Love this fic so much but I want more of this little family.
Author's Response: There will be a second bit, don't worry. I put it in the chapter notes. The second part will pick up at school. :) And thanks for reading and leaving such nice reviews!
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