| Title: Chapter 5 - Across the Pond.
| 12 Aug 2022 1:02 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love that Elliot is getting into his role, and Snape is seeing his behavior in relation to the other kids around him. This story is so brilliantly crafted.
Indiana Jones references always brighten my day. That sequence was very amusing and inspired. I also liked Harry’s quiet contemplation l, as it deepened the significance of the room and space. Thanks for a terrific read.
| Title: Chapter 3 - Pins and Needles
| 11 Aug 2022 1:24 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Only Snape could turn the notion of poisoning into a form of comfort. I like how you’ve portrayed Harry. Excellent chapter.
| Title: Chapter 2 - Good Morning, Hell.
| 11 Aug 2022 1:01 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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It was fun seeing Snape “enhance the effects” of Harry’s sampling of spirits the night before. Great chapter.
| Title: Chapter 1 - A Sip in the Park
| 10 Aug 2022 12:44 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This is one of the best opening chapters that I’ve read. The clock at the beginning was brilliant, as was the humor threaded throughout. I’m back for another read through, as your stories are all magnificent.
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 25 Apr 2021 1:12 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This is one of my absolute favorite stories. I simply love it.
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 14 Feb 2019 2:50 am
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| Reviewer: Kbharlow (Signed)
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I love this story! Love it! I love the way they interact, the sarcasm, the love that underlies all of their interactions.
| Title: Chapter 9 - The Basilisks and Billywigs
| 29 Aug 2018 1:59 pm
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| Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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I have re-read this story, often, and you are talented, from root to crown.
It is pleasing, gentle and you know how to craft the feeling of relationship.
You may laugh at me, a lot, but I have found the river Mersey, the restaurant, Lily's road, St.Mary Way, a park in Stockport, but not the small alley, on which you placed Snape's house,'Spinner's End- so what is the alley's road name?I hope it exists.
I would like to use Google earth to walk down it....
Would you give me a clue? *a hand tugging hair*
After 14. January 2016, your story gives a quiet balm.
He is missed.
Please write on from time to time.
Best regards.
Author's Response: I didn't use an exact address, but had in mind the park by Bridge Hall Primary and the neighbourhood south of there for Lily, and the neighbourhood directly north with the city/country names as Snapes. Hope that helps. :)
Lovely story, I enjoyed reading it very much! Thank you
| Title: Chapter 3 - Pins and Needles
| 12 Feb 2016 4:11 am
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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I wonder how much trouble Harry will be in once Snape finds out he has been doing teenage things again, lol.
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