Are you REALLY changing his name to Elliot?! As much as I love this story, that might be the thing that turns me away. Harry, in my mind, will always stay Harry.
But other than that, good chapter!
Author's Response: Not...really. He is staying Harry Potter in the wizarding world, it'll just be the name Snape uses once in a while. If that makes sense. :)
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 24 May 2010 3:57 am
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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I loved this story so much! The last chapter was great and I'm looking forward to the sequel. :)
| Title: Chapter 14 - A Boy Called Elliot
| 24 May 2010 3:42 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh, wow! The end already? Aw:(
Will you write a sequel Oliver?
Oh, I didn't realise that they were changing Harry's "first" name too.
Aw, Harry finally has a place to call "home" and someone permanent in his life.
Love this fic so much but I want more of this little family.
Author's Response: There will be a second bit, don't worry. I put it in the chapter notes. The second part will pick up at school. :) And thanks for reading and leaving such nice reviews!
| Title: Chapter 13 - Questions and Results
| 24 May 2010 12:37 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful as always thank you
| Title: Chapter 13 - Questions and Results
| 23 May 2010 6:13 am
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Great chapter! :)
I sure could have used some of that Go-Back-To-Sleep Cream this week. I love the daydream method of doing occlumency... I could deal with that!
And thanks for putting Severus into the red bed robe... as much as green is my favorite color and green-black my favorite combination, it gets really old to read fics where all that Severus owns is black, black, black and a bit of green.
Pardon my rambly-ness in this review; recovering from a migraine headache has my thoughts going every which way, but I really did enjoy this new bit of the story and I am very much looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing it!
Evil!!!! What a way to end the chapter. Cheeky, cheeky Harry. Surely Snape will appreciate his ability to induce a torturous sense of anticipation, much like you are eliciting from your readers ^__^.
Poor Harry losing Dumbledore so slowly, I love Dumbledore for maintaining his cheery outlook, trying to enjoy and make enjoyable the time he has left.
Thanks again for another enjoyable read.
| Title: Chapter 13 - Questions and Results
| 20 May 2010 7:57 am
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| Reviewer: legolasanimeluver (Anonymous)
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OH MY GAWD I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON-AND MAKE A SEQUEL PLEASE!! Oh and for an ideaL have Harry personality wise start to become more Snape-like! Have the Weasleys and other professors-but have Snape remain oblivious until they tell him-be shocked about his new personality and manners! Just for fun!
| Title: Chapter 13 - Questions and Results
| 20 May 2010 5:38 am
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| Reviewer: Jadiza66 (Anonymous)
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Snape stealing cable??? I love it!! This story is just incredibly awesome and I look forward to each new chapter with the anticipation of a child on Christmas morning!
| Title: Chapter 13 - Questions and Results
| 20 May 2010 5:11 am
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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Weee! Can't wait for more! Yay, yay, yay!
| Title: Chapter 13 - Questions and Results
| 20 May 2010 4:32 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Yeah, I know where you're coming from! When "I" come home from work, you can peel me off the floor. I just can't believe that you still managed to write such a great, funny chapter!
I'm really really loving this story. I adore your portrayal of Snape and Harry; don't change a thing! Snape is still snarky and dry and Harry is sweet, mischievous and you just want to hug the loveable brat! I love how he keeps getting into trouble, but it's not the malicious kind of trouble.
Ooh, what else can I say about this story, but just that I'm really enjoying it so much. I get a flutter of excitement in my tummy when I get a notice that you've updated! Keep up the great work!
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