| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 13 May 2010 3:45 am
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| Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed)
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Oh I love snape being all daddyish! Sweat i love this !
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 12 May 2010 7:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Quynce (Signed)
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My goodness, is there anything cuter than seasick child!Harry and a comforting Snape? No, I don't think so. I hope there's more adoption discussion and more analysis of Harry's friends (I'm sure his 15 year old self has more critical thinking skills).
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 11:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I do love how you write Eliot and Severus thay are definately on of my favourite pairings thank you
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 5:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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*sighs* happily. Lovely chapter as always dear. I'm so glad to have read it. Please update soon!
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 5:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous)
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Well, I have read this chapter thrice already and this is the second review that I am posting on this chapter even though I completely disagree with Snape's characterization ( very OOC for me) - that's how good u write ... can't get enough sort of. Love Snape-kid Harry.
I know that Severus told Harry to think about it for a week, but I have a feeling that both of their minds are already made up. Despite themselves, they have become a family.
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 4:29 am
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| Reviewer: orgwoman (Signed)
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Awww, so sweet! I love this interaction between Snape and Harry. Usually I don't like Snape getting too sappy, but you keep him in character enough that it's a believable bonding between the two. Once again, lots happening in this chapter that keeps the story moving at a good pace while still developing the main characters. Great job!
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 2:25 am
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| Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous)
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Wel, I dont know about other women on the boat but I'm totally ready to go home with Snape :)
Loved it as always.
Do you know that I actually read this story backward - as in starting from the last chapter to the first.
It's great - the story, I mean, not backward reading.
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 2:08 am
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| Reviewer: love_it (Signed)
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You are a great writer! You blend humor, drama, and action seamlessly. I really enjoy reading this story, and am so glad whenever you update! The entire chapter was flawless, and the character development is well-wrought. I can't even begin pointing out the bits that I liked, because then I would be simply reiterating the whole chapter to you! haha... Keep up the great work!
| Title: Chapter 11 - The Stalemate's Offer
| 11 May 2010 1:59 am
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| Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Anonymous)
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I like little Harry especially... he's just too cute! Love this story and hope your schedule will ease up a little and let you keep going with this story.
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